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My journal....
Just... random nonsense... venting... blah blah blah.
This poem popped into my head this morning.....
Lowly little robot
Standing within the trees
No woodland creature-- or human
Has ever come for me.
So stand there I must
And soon I begin to rust
As my lustrous silver
Returns to Copper
I stand there and stare
At the forest trees, bare
In hopes they'll be luckier than I~

My knees no longer bend
My fingers no longer hold
As the rust encases my body,
I return to my original mold.
However, no matter how much
I lose my ability to sense,
I kept my hope that the growing of these trees
Would one day soon commence.~






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Ganjin
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 24, 2010 @ 08:51am
that User Image ... was stare ... beautiful whee ...

curious though neutral ... what happened to the trees gonk ...?

lets see ninja ... the forest trees are bare and he wants them to grow again User Image ... hints at a sad tale with a chance of new beginnings twisted ... but perhaps me be over thinking it sweatdrop ... but it has kind of a tin man feel--from the wizard of oz before he met dorothy--most interesting 3nodding ...


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 24, 2010 @ 06:41pm
o~o

OH MY GOD!!
I had that same feeling!! Right before the poem popped into my head, I was thinking about the Tin-Man too.............
XD

Haha, that's kinda funny........... mrgreen
But thanks.... I dunno what happened to the trees........... sad
That part didn't come to me.
XD



Farfellion Rincrick
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