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This is the first chapter of a story i made up. WARNING: this is a vampire love story, meant for girls, but anyone can read it if they want to. It currently has no title.
Gender: Female
Your name: whatever you want.
Your looks: whatever you want.
Your age: 16
Your life: you have a pretty average life. You are an only child, and you have average parents.

STORY START!!

You are sitting in your room alone after a typical boring day of school. 'What a awful day...' you think as you lay on your bed, staring at the celing. Even though it's midnight, you still can't get to sleep. You sit up in bed and look arround the room, trying to find either somthing to do, or somthing to help you get to sleep. No such luck.

As you absent-mindedly look arround your room, you see that your window is open, and the ghostly light of the full moon is spilling into your room. 'That's strange.' You think. 'I don't remember ever opening my window.... oh well, maybe Mom opened it. Besides, maybe watching the moon for a while will help me get to sleep'. You walk over to your window and stare out into the moonlight.
'It's so beautiful...' You think as you sit upon your windowsill (you have a big window). After several minutes you finally start to feel drowsy, so you decide to go back to bed, but also decide to leave your window open, after all, it was a warm night.

As you lie back into your bed, you look around the room one last time. As your eyes land on a dark corner of your room, there is a pair of yellow eyes. 'It must be a trick of the moonlight.' You think, but just to be sure, you look away and rub your eyes, hoping that they will disapear, but as you turn and look again, not only are the eyes not gone, but they appear to be closer.

Now you're kinda freaked out. "W-who's there? W-who a-are you?" You ask cautiously, hoping against all hope that you are just imagining things. There is no response from the eyes that never even seem to blink. As you stare at them, they suddenly dissapear. 'Wierd...' You think, but then, just as you think it, you feel hot breaths on the back of your neck.

Frightened, you turn arround slowly. Again you see the yellow eyes, and this time there is a body, draped in shadow. The eyes give you a hungry, malicious look, and you scream.

You back away quickly, but you hit a wall, the one near your window. The shadowed figure slowly comes closer, stepping into the moonlight. The shadow falls away from it's form, and you can see what it truely is. Glowing yellow eyes, sharp teeth dripping with saliva fill it's pointed snout. Fur covers most of it's body, and it's huge claws gleem in the light of the full moon. A were wolf. "It's not possible!" You scream. "You can't be real!" The beast is standing on two legs, hunched over to examine it's prey.

Suddenly it lunges at you. You try to escape, but it is too fast. It cuts your shoulder open, almost to the bone. You give a sharp gasp and cringe in pain, pain like you have never felt before. Again, the monster lunges. Again you try to escape, but the pain is too intense, and you can't move. The beast slices your leg open, toying with you until it will deliver the death blow. You feel yourself falling unconcious, the pain of your shoulder and leg combined is too great. 'I have to stay awake!' You shout in your head. 'If I black out, I'm gonna die!' The were wolf is tired of toying with you, and lunges at you with the intent to end your life. You close your eyes tightly, waiting for death....

But it never comes. Slowly, you re-open your eyes to see that the beast has backed up, a faint glint of fear in it's yellow eyes. You turn arround slowly, your curiousity taking over. You want to find out just what it is that has managed to frighten this monster, if only in the slightest.

As you turn, you see another figure hidden in shadows. The only feature you can make out, is it's ice blue eyes.

The beast lunges for you again, but the figure attacks it, throwing them both backwards, fighting. You begin to back up in fear, and you end up backed against your open window. The were wolf lunges at the figure, and the figure side-steps it, only to have the beast come crashing into you. Both you and the beast fall out of the 2 story window. You hear the wolf hit thr ground first, and your waiting to meet the hard ground below.....

but you never do. You seem to be floating above the ground. 'How is that possible...?' You think, but then you feel someone's arms around you, holding you close. You look up, but the figure is still encasesd in shadow. The pain in your shoulder and leg start to catch up with you at that moment, and the last thing you see before you black out.....

is a pair of ice blue eyes.


End Of Chapter 1

please comment about what you thought of my first atempt at a story. I will accept all comments, good and bad.