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My book and an update!
Ok so first things first. I got internet back! REALLY THIS TIME!!! so im going to be on more and be able to talk to people i have not been and what not. Also i am going to do an album review tomorrow which is good cause i have not done one, but its going to be one that a little old right now... the good news is that im going to be online more so ill be updated with new albums so that i can do my reviews on that! since my reviews get a lot more views then my... well these blog things D: lol.

so my other news is that who ever has been keeping up with my lame journal knows that im writing a book, and its done but im still in the edit/revise process. This being said i am thinking about doing another book. Im still going to be working on the one i am but im going to put ideas and things like that on paper getting together a rough draft. The new book is going to be called "Bitter Sweet" and its going to be about demons and angles, basicly some sort of harry potter/twilight/percy jackson mix... the only problem is that i do feel like these type of stories are over used so im not sure if i should proceed? what do you think? if your reading this!

Back to my first book im working on! i thought it would be a good idea to put down a small part of the first chapter (which is like the prolouge) right here on this post so you can get a feel of how i write and what basicly the book is about. Its called "A day to remember". I know im not the best writer and i do need tons of improvement on the craft of writing but im working on it. I dream to one day write a best selling novel D:< haha. a little bit of too high of hopes dont you think? anyways here it is. (SORRY THAT IT MIGHT BE MASHED UP CAUSE THE WAY THE JOURNAL WORKS. its not really in right format D: )

A DAY TO REMEMBER

I Lane

The year is 2115, and a lot has changed over time. In 2020, devastations started to happen all around the world. These strange phenomenon happening were killing everyone off. We could not explain it, and as such, was in what we like to put best the apocalypse. Even though many survived, even more died. This tragedy led the question of, why? People started to blame it on global warming, God, and other crazy things; never thinking for a second that their egotistical fantasies might have been the thing to blame. In 2030, after everything was over, World War Three began. Basically everyone was pointing fingers on who was responsible for our earth trying to destroy us, oblivious to the fact that it was all our faults or maybe just the environments way of unpopulated the world once more. I think this happened in like the bible or something, but not the religious type so I would not know.
2035, we teamed up with Mexico, Britain and Spain. Eventually going into what, we now call, The Hell War. Russia somehow got a new dictator that was very cunning and devastatingly powerful. They came together with China, Iraq, and made Britain turn on us, soon leading to our downfall. Many other countries tried to stay out of it because they were too busy worrying about themselves and others were already whipped out.
After twenty long years of war, we lost. Russia then expanded their army and took over becoming a super power of their own. America lost their freedom, and now we are made an example of; in slavery. The Russians do this so that if anyone is thinking about standing in the way they will have to look, and see how the all mighty America fell, then rethink what they were about to do. It’s not a bad idea, though I wish I was not the one being made the example.
Many Russians now reside in the United States, making this their home in a way to just laugh in our faces that we lost. But I like to believe we just have better land then they do, and their jealous.
Sure, there are many other things other than the war that one could talk about, like the cure of cancer in 2092, but no one really cares about that anymore. It hardly seems relevant to the current situation. No one really looks back at all the good that has happened in the past anymore; just looking forward at all the crap that’s happening now.
I live in what is left of the beloved Las Vegas, Nevada. Whatever anyone pictured before about this place, they are wrong now. There are no casinos left anymore; just a dessert wasteland and some small communities. Within these small communities there is one in specific made for what they call The Privileged. A place where you are free because of what you can contribute to Russia.
I am one of these ‘Privileged’ people because my dad is one of the head managers at this place called District 1, where they make weapons for the country. I would consider myself lucky, but I still rather live in a world where the U.S is a nation to be proud of because of how much freedom you have. Not just for the fact that you are talented enough to have a little more freedom then others.






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Xx freewaymadison xX
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Tue Jan 18, 2011 @ 11:03pm


Magnificent biggrin


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