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Elis

An arrow whizzed past, where a young girl around seven years of age, knelt on the forest floor next to her dead father. She gripped her father's hand crying as she was saying, "Wake up daddy! I need you! You can't leave me now! Please, daddy!" She took the arrow out of her father's stomach and pulled it out, then threw it on the ground next to her. She touched her father's stomach, as if trying to heal him, as another set of arrows came flying past, she cryed even harder. For on her hand... Was her father's blood.

A horse rider stopped at Elis's side and screamed, "Elis! Come, now! We need to leave before you get killed too!" "No!" Yelled Elis in reply, "Not without Daddy!" "Elis, he's dead!" The horse rider, appearing to be her mother, picked Elis up and set her on the horse, which looked a blinding white color with a golden mane. It was a very odd horse, indeed it was. But, before the little girl's (named Elis) mother could get a good grip on Elis, she jumped off and grabbed her father's bow and arrows and his belt, where his sword was sheathed, as was his dagger. After Elis had picked up her father's items, her mother picked her up. When they were galloping away, Elis yelled back to her father's corpse, "I will find whoever did this to you! I promise! When I do, I will kill them! I'm coming back for you daddy!" They finaly made it to the safety of a far-away town... Where they now live.
That was my beggining of the book. Good luck editing it, if you want to.






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Sgt.Joe
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commentCommented on: Fri Feb 17, 2006 @ 06:11am
SOoo cool! Please write more! I've finally gotten to read it yay! blaugh


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