The Fallen
This is a story I have been thinking about for a while now. It's about two fallen angels who become demons. Basically, that's it in a nutshell. But I think the whole transformation from a being of light to darkness is quite interesting. Please tell me what you think. I'm open to all suggestions, this is far from the final draft.
How art thou fallen from heaven, Lucifer? That's what the young angel thought as her brother held her in his arms. They had been wandering alone in the darkness since their banishment. "Why must we suffer?" she asked her brother. "Because we were foolish enough to follow him. He who is the cause of our suffering." he answered his sister in a bitter tone. He remembered the battle from so long ago. Friends were turned to foes in that day. The ambitious angel, Lucifer, believed himself to be the greater of all the angels, even greater than God himself.
"We were such fools, sister. We actually believed that we could..." but before he could continue, his sister cut him off. "You must not dwell on our defeat. We have to accept that we were wrong." Her words were true, thinking of defeat only made the situation worse. The two of them continued their wandering through the endless darkness. There was nothing, it was as if they were walking in a cave with no end. Giving up all hope of finding any survivors from the war, the two of them gave up.
"It's hopeless, sister." he said laying her on the ground.
