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Poetry and Life
If you do read my journal with my poems, please, and I mean Please, post a comment on wha you think about them to let me know what you really actually think about them, cause I need to know if they are any good to publish =]
Lonely
Days without a father,
has me saying why bother.
I wonder why,
Why couldn't he say one last bye.
I don't even know his real name,
it makes me feel lame.
Who is he?
Why did you leave me?
I wish I had a father that would never lose me out of his sight,
I wish he was there to show me what is right.
I wish he was there to tell me I'm proud of you , son ,
for all the good things I have done.






User Comments: [3]
tenten323323
Community Member





Fri Oct 02, 2009 @ 10:26pm


thats sad but more people then ur father can tell u that they r proud of u


Lakisha12345
Community Member





Sat Oct 03, 2009 @ 12:03am


good sad


Ona660
Community Member





Fri Feb 26, 2010 @ 02:36am


Aww~! X3 that's all I can say about it...I can feel you though...*sighs*


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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