Felt...
My Thoughts: ok, well i made it up on the spot...and I tried rhyming this time hopefully I did good
About: Um....feeling horrid, until i found that special someone who made me feel....better.
Just Wondering: So if theres any way i could improve as a writer, please feel free to write whatever crap you want...on a comment.
I felt like a child who was lost.
but now was found
I felt like i was sufficating, dying.
but your words were a fresh breath of air
I felt like my heart was tossed.
but you placed my heart back together
I felt like eyes were burned-red from all my crying.
but you wipped all my tears away.
I felt like my mind was at exhaust.
but you eased my mind from all the darkness I hid
I felt like my soul is unew
but you revived my soul into a blooming flower
And i cant help but wonder if you felt the same too?
but now was found
I felt like i was sufficating, dying.
but your words were a fresh breath of air
I felt like my heart was tossed.
but you placed my heart back together
I felt like eyes were burned-red from all my crying.
but you wipped all my tears away.
I felt like my mind was at exhaust.
but you eased my mind from all the darkness I hid
I felt like my soul is unew
but you revived my soul into a blooming flower
And i cant help but wonder if you felt the same too?
-V
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