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BEAUITFUL Eyes are beautiful Seeing is beautiful Blind eyes Yes, are beautiful Too see Is a gift To understand Is rich Even to those that can't see I don't need to look into your eyes to see your sincerity I feel it Yes, feeling is rich Feeling is beautiful Allowing your passion to fill another's heart Is a gift Hearing is beautiful you know "I love you." "I'll be there." Hearing is painful "I hate you." "You're just a pretender." "You're ugly." Hearing is a gift Speaking is a weapon To cure And destroy Sense should be ordinary But it's not Street smarts aren't my skill Yet homework gets done easily Sense is a gift You make me feel I understand all that you speak You are my gift Shed more light upon me to see Because this shadowed arena That I call my heart Could have you I want you to conquer me Be my Seme Tell me what I need to hear Show me your world Let us be My God Being alive Is beautiful

Posted by: Idiosyncratic Quirk Mon Jun 02, 2008 @ 11:42pm

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Commented on: Tue Jun 03, 2008 @ 12:29am


	I like it. smile Simple yet elegantly written. It focuses more on feeling of words than structure of the poem and diction which makes the style perfect for your meaning. smile I also really enjoy how you did the " My God Being Alive Is beautiful" Very well emphasis and I also really just enjoy how you said that. Nice poem, Gunner. smile

Commented on: Tue Jun 03, 2008 @ 01:16am


	Hrm, not really my style of poem, but i like it. Poetic element wise, not much, word wise, pretty good. It could use work here and there, but every poem can until finally it hits the point where it has nothing more to e done, then even it could use mroe work.