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Whee! i have a new poem! I hope you guys like this one, its kinda derived from something that happened to me recently, but i won't delve into specifics. Please remember to leave comments if you like it or just have some criticism, both are appreciated, also remember, DO NOT COPY!!!!! *makes evil face*I will hunt you down and sue you!
*back to cute + adorable face* Hope you like it!
Here it is! *there's no title for this one*

Did you really want to hurt me?
Or could you just not see?
How I would look at you,
Daze longingly...
Cause truthfully you're more to me
Than life itself
Now I'm being ignored,
Just put upon your shelf
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Chorus:
Where are you my angel?
Why did you have to go?
Can she really love you,
As much as me, do you know
That I've been here, all the while
Protecting you from afar
Now that you have shunned me
Cut me and left a scar
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Is it really that you don't see me?
Do you purposely ignore?
Cause you know, i have feelings
Yet you throw them on the floor
You love her, I see that now
So I shall be your friend
I will but I don't know how
I'll love you 'till the end...
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Chorus:
Where are you my angel?
Why did you have to go?
Can she really love you,
As much as me, do you know
That I've been here, all the while
Protecting you from afar
Now that you have shunned me
Cut me and left a scar...
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I've become much smarter, see
I have found someone else
He loves me and he sees me
He knows just how i felt
regret? No I don't expect you to
opens your eyes, blind man, see
He will never replace you
You're still the world to me
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Chorus:
Where are you my angel?
Why did you have to go?
Can she really love you,
As much as me, do you know
That I've been here, all the while
Protecting you from afar
Now that you have shunned me
Cut me and left a scar...
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That's it! I actually cried while writing this song cause for the first time in a long time i could actually connect this to real life. I dramatized it just a smidge (but who doesn't embellish things every now and then?) But its how i really feel about what happened. i just wish i could write some music to this, i will eventually, since I'm currently learning how to play my guitar. Anyway, that's about it, hope you liked my latest installment in my poetry book.
Goodnight, all, i hope you shall have pleasant dreams. Or not, just in case some of u r emo like me...
BYE! 4laugh
~*Aubrey*~