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ROUND 5 JUDGING
this is somewhat simple, actually.
you are going to make a backwards avatar.
that means that it can't be on tektek!
even though you're limited to your own inventory,
make it look good (and maybe difficult layering. if possible).
you can also make a blob. just make sure to tell us what you're going for.
creativity is the key!
entries are to be PMed to garage glamour, before Monday 20th of July, 11:59PM GMT.
if you hand your entry after that, there will be -10 points for you.
if you haven't handed your entry in before Tuesday 21th of July, 11:59PM GMT,
you will get disqualified.
I hope i mentioned everything,
if there are any questions, feel free to ask me.
so now gogogo and work!
JUDGING
Techi  garage glamour- i like it. it's simple, yet elegant.the shoes bother me. they have a shade of grey on them, and it looks odd. i still like this though. 23/25 Qwanna- This looks like it would be on Project Runway, but it looks a little generic. The bow theme looks great. 24/25 Jamais Changeant- Mm...it works, but it seems really safe and boring. The feet kill the flow. Those socks are too solid. 18/25 Total : 90//100
432//500
King Of Ninjas  I used wiki for a rainbow guidegarage glamour- hmmm it's okay. the only things that bother me are the hairpins, and the green things. isn't there a green scarf? :/ 16/25 Qwanna- It looks good, but the flow is slightly bad, my eyes always revert back to the red bow. 20/25 Jamais Changeant- You didn't really need a link...I can instantly tell the flow is meant to represent a rainbow, but the textures of the items don't flow well. 15/25 Total : 75//100
363//500
Evolu  CHAT LOG
*Shaman Salad joins your party!
*Dwarf Cleric Meow Meows joins your party!
BATTLE LOG
Wild Nightiger appears!
Wizard Evolu uses Firaga.
57 Damage!
Wild Nightiger uses Shadow Slash.
93 Damage!
Wizard Evolu uses Cure.
Wizard Evolu recovers 75 Hp!
Wild Nightiger uses Roar.
Attack is ineffective!
Wizard Evolu uses Sap.
Wizard Evolu recovers 17 Hp!
51 Damage!
Wild Nightiger is defeated!
Wild Nightiger dropped 100 gil and Cat's Eye Ruby.
Wizard Evolu gains 45 Exp.garage glamour- the description and everything is nice but the av looks messy..really messy to me :/ 15/25 Qwanna- It looks good and has a nice story, it seems a bit unorganized 20/25 Jamais Changeant- XD I like the description, but I like the fact that it works without the description even more. You really went for this and you mostly succeeded in making an impressive design. As I look closer, however, there are a lot of off colors and you abused the Egyptian items. 16/25 Total : 76//100
405//500
Mr Meow Meows  garage glamour- it's nice. but those few hints of purple bother me Dx 19/25 Qwanna- You could have put more effort, the whole heavenly cloud theme is overused in the arena. It does look pretty. 18/25 Jamais Changeant- This isn't completely original. I feel like I've seen it a few times before. It's done rather nicely though. 18/25 Total : 80//100
348//500
Madame Ginseng  "All the sea witch wanted was to be human, but was the spell worth the risk?"garage glamour- i like this c: but why those earphones and cane? they look kinda odd ;< 23/25 Qwanna- Good story, good avatar, the back torso is a bit too non-sparkly like the rest of the avatar. 23/25 Jamais Changeant- Why is the seawitch wearing headphones? Maybe she should be focusing on her spell instead. The flow isn't really there (bunch of conflicting patterns). The head stands out in an awkward way. 17/25 Total : 88//100
439//500
challenge winner: [Techi]
challenge eliminee: no one
disqualified: My Fishy Demise, for handing in an entry past the second deadline.
 garage glamour · Wed Jul 29, 2009 @ 01:14pm · 0 Comments |
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ROUND 4 JUDGING
crap, why do i always seem to not save the rounds? :l
diseases/disorders/whatever
depression - king of ninjas
anorexia - my fishy demise
somnolence - evolu
insomnia - techi
obesity - mr meow meows
mono - madame ginseng
JUDGING
King Of Ninjas  Depression:
1. Sadness; gloom; dejection.
2. A depressed or sunken place or part; an area lower than the surrounding surface.garage glamour- it's... so plain. and idunno. it isn't really special or something. looks kinda like a too fat school kid or something. 14/25 uggh seann- I dont really see depression here, it looks like you just couldnt convey the depression on the avatar, so you copped out, and just threw another kind of depression onto the ground. 10//25 Lady Denna- I see sadness..Not real depression. The ground is a fun add on but the rest..Well I dont see it. 10/25 Viperface- he doesn't look depressed. he actually kinda looks like he pooped his pants and is REALLY hoping nobody notices. Dx 13/25 Total : 47//100
288//400
My Fishy Demise  Another 10pounds and I will be ready for my new swimsuit.garage glamour- i kinda like this. though i wish you'd done more with the head, the wig like that is really boring. 19/25 uggh seann- The use of the skeleton was a good choice, I mean some may say its predictable, but what else would you have done? The tattoos however are somewhat tacky though, I mean I dont think a young teen with the disease that wants to get into a swimsuit would have a hulking tattoo on her calf. 20//25 Lady Denna- I think the use of the skeleton was a tad predicteble. Tattoos, I dont really see them fit. 12/25 Viperface- this is kind of funny is a really messed up way.the tattoos are a bit questionable, but its lovely. 22/25 Total : 73//100
304//400
Evolu  Somnolence (or "drowsiness" ) is a state of near-sleep, a strong desire for sleep, or sleeping for unusually long periods.
The human body can become sleepy in response to infection. Such somnolence is one of several sickness behaviors or reactions to infection that evolved to promote recovery by conserving energy while the body fights the infection using fever and other means.
Even though somnolence can seem innocent, there may be a dangerous cause lurking beneath the surface, such as brain damage, or lyme disease.
I tried to portray the innocence, and the feeling of drifting off to sleep.
I also tried to include the hidden dangers of this condition, through the almost concealed 'demons' in the backround.garage glamour- i really like this. you seem to amaze me everytime, you're kind of like the underdog, aren't you? no offense, but i hadn't heard of you when you applied, and i thought well she'll be out in the first 2 rounds, which leaves me with only the regs i know. but you're not. and i like that 'cause you're really good and you know what you're doing. anyway, i really like this avv. you can almost say love. yea, this is my fav for this round. you go girl! 25/25 uggh seann- Definitely my favorite for this round, that avatar alone without the background or the theme behind it is great, and then once you read more about the disease and your reasons while choosing everything, you really start to like the avatar all the more. Im in love honestly, this is great. Much better than the others. 25//25 Lady Denna- I think this is great, you tought of it and you didnt just make somebody in PJ. 21/25 Viperface- this is perfect. you captured the condition perfectly, and used a lot of good layering and matching. At the same time, it tells a story. 25/25 Total : 96//100
329//400
Techi  Merv the Perv, the kids called him. But it wasn't his fault he sat out on the porch all night on his laptop. He was bored. This poor man suffered from insomnia and had nothing better to do at 12am, 2am, 4am, 6am or later than to sit up on his laptop and play games... and other things. He'd always yawn and the bags under his eyes were so heavy it looked like he'd been punched. Merv the Perv, the kids called him, but poor Merv simply suffered from insomnia, and his situation unfortunately made him seem a little pervertedgarage glamour- Oh techi.. if you can't sleep, and play games and other things on your laptop, why do you sit on the porch all night? i don't get it :C 15/25 uggh seann- I dont really see the theme of insomnia in this, I mean except for the eyes, you would just think its a fat nerd who likes to be on the computer. I mean this probably would have been better for obesity or something, but I dont really like what you did with this. This round was supposed to be diseases, and you conveyed yours rather poorly. 15//25 Lady Denna- I laughed. A lot. 19/25 Viperface- I loled. C: great characterization, but i wish you worked a bit more with the condition since the story seems to be more focused on *****... 19/25 Total : 68//100
342//400
Mr Meow Meows  After several days of camping, Gregory thought the animals where too cute to eat. A few days later without sweets though.... garage glamour- idunno kitty, you could have made it all with candy everywhere, those strawberries and stuff, but you didn't. and i don't like it that much. 14/25 uggh seann- Are you supposed to be conveying an all green avatar, an avatar that likes to camp, or one who has a liking for little candy animals? I really think you conveyed this theme horribly, and considering you had one of the easiest ones, I would have thought you to do much much better. I mean I dont see your theme at all. 5//25 Lady Denna- Mmm..I dont really see the theme in it.. 13/25 Viperface- strong showing. I can't help feel that its a bit messy, though. I think you definately could have picked some bigger clothes, gaia certainly has them. 18/25 Total : 47//100
268//400
Madame Ginseng  "Mononucleosis, also know as Mono or Kissing Sickness. Most people believe the illness is caused by a common virus, but the wise know that the true cause is the fearsome/sexy Kissing Imp! Infecting hapless, hormonal high schoolers since the dawn of time. Or...since the dawn of high school."garage glamour- you should've given her that lusty scoundrel hair to make her even more sexy xD i like it. also the story with it. LOVE those lips, they fit your story so well, but i really feel like something's missing.. 23/25 uggh seann- I would have thought whoever got this would make a monochromatic avatar with those red lips, xD. But you did good with this, and I really like the description that is tacked onto this, I think you have one of the harder ones, and I really think you did well. But I dont think the theme is really easy to see, because it was such a hard disease to do. And I definitely think that one of the celebrity dates would have been a good add on to this maybe, but oh well. You did what you thought was best, and it worked somewhat. 22//25 Lady Denna- Its cute. And greatly done. Accually its perfect. 25/25 Viperface- fun idea, but i think you kinda sidestepped mono in favor of the story. Clever, though, will give you that. 20/25 Total : 90//100
351//400
Challenge winner: Evolu
Challange eliminee: no one
Disqualified: Sylwithia, for not handing in an entry.
garage glamour · Wed Jul 29, 2009 @ 01:12pm · 0 Comments |
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