Last night I had this crazy dream, and it inspired me to write a new story about a problem that happens in most homes. So far I have a structure, and i wanted to put it here until I have the whole story. Tell me what you think...
Mr. Chaste left his wife and daughter when Ryvera was 2. 15 years later, Ryvera has developed a good friendship with Troy, and an eternal despise for Sara, the most popular girl at her school. Two months after the start of her senior year, Mr. Chaste, or Charlie as she calls him, comes back and wants to be part of her life again. At first she's a bit skeptical, but she believes him. After a while, she starts getting this weird dream where she feels something bumping into her. One day, her father starts suggesting inappropiate themes to her. Of course she shrugs this off, until her dad picks her up from school, drives into an abandoned parking lot, and rapes her. The she realizes that those dreams were cause by her father raping her in her sleep. This continues for a few months, and Ryvera keeps it a secret. This takes a toll on her health and her sanity. One day her father brings a friend home, and they both rape her. This causes her to do drastic things, like cut her wrist in school. Troy tries to find out what's wrong, but she doesn't want to tell him. When her father suggests to her mom that Ryvera should stay with him, she cracks. She calls the police and Charlie is put on trial. Near the end of the year, rumors start going through the school about her being a whore. One day she writes a paper about this experience for her English class, and it is read aloud. Sara makes a sarcastic remark about the paper being a list of Ryvera's filthy mistakes. Ryvera calmly answers, "The only mistake made was my father deciding to come back from the wrong reasons."
tell me what you think...
RavenMasen15 Community Member 
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