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	LOOK, STUFF!!! Songs! and the random stuff that I think about, and what happens during my day.

	Poem in progress... not entirely done ....yet
	Poem in progress... not entirely done ....yet


Do you love me? Do you love me Words that cling Leaving the torment of souls From which they spring They resonate deeply From heart to mind Causing chaos of spirit For others to find Can you trust that answer? Something put into words When feelings go deeper No, those go unheard For no answer is simple When love is concerned… Do you love me? They are words that sting Lacerating deeply Leaving scars unseen Painful and burning They scorch the soul Shattering belief Tearing a gaping hole Imbed themselves in you Penetrate the skin Then rip your insides back out Like incisions from a pin Leaving you on the floor bleeding And dieing within Elavine · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 03:54am · 8 Comments


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	User Comments: [8]
	User Comments: [8]


	I like that poem but the last lines make me wince. surprised Offline Radiant Bliss · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 04:02am


	i never knew u were so deep... Offline BattleFoxes · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 05:20am


	do those words really hurt u elavine... sad Offline BattleFoxes · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 05:27am


	Sometimes... Offline Elavine · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 11:54am


	crying Offline lilruben23 · Community Member · Thu Dec 14, 2006 @ 12:14am


	Its an internal question, the ever ringing torrent of captive emotion that is held up in simple words. Its about choosing to give your heart to someone and having to trust that they feel the same. About believeing that when they repond, its more than just words they are saying. Its about the hesitation and weighing of consiquences that comes from deciding to believe in that trust. Its about fearing what comes of saying that and being rejcted... it really takes some reading into. Offline Elavine · Community Member · Fri Dec 15, 2006 @ 02:37am


	i kno what u mean 3nodding Offline BattleFoxes · Community Member · Mon Dec 18, 2006 @ 04:55am


	Hehe, thanks Battle ^.^ Offline Elavine · Community Member · Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 04:50am

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