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here is my story that i wrote it is called my faather the devil.

My Father the Devil



Hello I’m Jinakie Naizico. If you think that this is a story about a normal girl who obsesses only about boys and cares about high school drama then stop reading this. This is far from that. You see my mother was just a common woman named Aniko, and my father well he is the devil. How you ask, well, let me start at where things began to get strange. This all started at the movies.

My best, and only, friend Sarah and I were at the movies watching The Prestige. I didn’t have a care in the world that moment. I was just a normal kid. Well normal in my eyes. You see, most kids, adults, and others think im some sort of a freak that worships the devil, but I don’t. I am really an Alterative Christen, ironic I know, that’s beside the point. Well after the movies Sarah and I headed to my house. That’s the normal part, but while I was at the movies there was this guy following me.

Most people would think that would be strange I know, but all my life I have been followed by people. They would all where the same cloths to. All black with a leather jacket with a hood covering there face. One time I got a good look at his face. He had a normal face but demonish at the same time.

I was only seven at that time and strangely enough I wasn’t scared. I felt warmth and comfort in this guy’s face. I most likely would have stayed with him if my adopted-mom Annie, hadn’t of called me.

This time was different though. Normally they would have stopped following me if I had someone with me. This one followed me all the way home and stood outside of my house. I would have told my step mom
But she never really saw them. She said it was my imagination. When I kept telling her that there was someone following me, she sent me to a therapist!

All night that guy was outside my house and every time I tried to get Sarah to look at him he would be gone. I gave up trying to get her to see him and went to bed. I had the same dream that I have had since I was seven after I meet that man.

I was in a dark, clammy, fiery cave. There was blood, spiky walls, and demons all around me. They weren’t trying to hurt me or anything they were bowing. I heard screams of terror all around. I walked toward the end of the cave and hoped that I could finally get to the end. I walked for what seemed like hours on end I finally got to the end. I tried to look up but I couldn’t. The man spoke words I would never forget. He said

“Welcome my daughter.”

“Jin, Jin! Jin, wake up!” Sarah said nudging me awake.

“Huh, wha? What do you want Sarah?” I said annoyed at my worried friend.

“You were moaning and groaning in your sleep?”

“Really?”

“Ya, you were saying, almost there, don’t stop walking, look up … what was your dream about?” my puzzled friend asked.


“I don’t remember,” I lied. I didn’t want to worry her.
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LATER THAT DAY

The rest of the day went extremely slow. I walked Sarah home. Got a jacket for school tomorrow. The same old same old. The guy from outside my house was still following me. But as normal I just ignored it.
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THE NEXT DAY

I made it through most of the day with out being called a freak and I just had one class left and that’s when the real trouble started. I was in my art class and the preppy chicks started saying crap about me and my family and then they started on my adopted mom and that was what set me off.

“If you have a problem with me don’t take it out on my mom” I yelled at them with full hearted anger

“OH NO, she is going to put some sort of spell
On me.” Sakura said at me while laughing with her friend. “I can say all I want about you and your family and you can’t do anything about it.”

“You wanna bet?”

“You ain’t going to do anything. Just go to your own corner of the room and leave us be, Satanist”

And that is what set me off. I went out of control and attacked her. She screamed and I came running at her, grinding my teeth, I sprung on her. Punching and kicking as hard as I could. I couldn’t help it. As I was knocking her unconscious I cried. While I inflicted pain in her I let my pain out. I wanted to do that to her all my life. I couldn’t take her with her you’re a Satanist, watch out she is going to put a spell on us, I just had to do it, what seemed like hours on end I was finally pulled of her and dragged into a cop car, and she was dragged off to the hospital.

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LATER THAT NIGHT

Ok, I know I shouldn’t have fought her. But I did. I can’t change that. To tell the truth I am glad I did it. Well anyways my mom Annie finally bailed me out of jail, and after the talk she gave me I wish I was still in jail.

“Jin, Jin, Jin. How many times have I told you not to go out of control like that?” my frustrated adopted mom.

“You would’ve done the same thing if you were in my spot.” I replied back.

“No I would of. You have no self control Jin. I swear sometimes you make me ask where I went wrong.”

“Sorry I am such a burden.”

“Jin, that’s not what-” I wouldn’t let her finish her sentence. I was too ticked. I just got up went to the door and left. It wasn’t very smart. It was the middle of the night and raining. I had no where to go, no one to talk to. I was alone…or so I thought.
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LATER

“Hello, little girl. What the matter, lost?” a ragged man with ripped clothing asked.

“Get away from me you hobo.”

“HOBO! I am not a hobo.” the man said while grabbing a knife out of his pocket. “How dare you call me a hobo you little urchin. Give me your money!”

“I have no money.” I stated

“I am not a fool. I know you have money give me it now!”

“I don‘t have any.”

“Then give me what you have.” he said while putting the knife to my throat and trying to yank off a necklace I had on.

“Here, just take it and leave.” I yelled in disgust at the man

“And what if I don’t.” he replied. And with that I slapped him.

“You little brat” He slowly took the knife and began to aim it toward me. When all of a sudden, the man from outside my house who came out of know where jumped onto the man and snapped his neck.


“Are you ok?” he asked. His hood had fallen down when he jumped on to the other man, to revile a pale faced, long flowing black hair, bright blue eyes and thin lips.

“Im, im fine”

“Good, we can’t have you killed before your coronation.”

“Coronation?” I asked puzzled by what he was saying.

“We don’t have the time for me to explain it now. We need to leave.”

“Who are you?”

“A friend.” he remarked cold and emotionless.

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LATER

The man who saved me was named Alex. I kept on asking him question but he wouldn’t answer fully with most of them.

“Where are we going?” I asked

“Somewhere safe for you.” he replied

“Ok… so what is this `coronation’ for”

“I let your father explain that”

“My father?”

“Yes, we’re here.” we arrived at what appeared to be a night club. Alex went up to the bouncer and said something to him. “Let’s go.”

He led me into the club to the back into the bathroom with an out of order sign on it.

“In here.”

“You sure don’t say much do you?”

“Let’s go”

We went into a bathroom stall. He flush the toilet locked the door and lifted the seat. The toilet started to rise, to revile a staircase. He led the way down the staircase. We walked in silence for what seemed like hours. At the end there was this huge metal, archway.

“Open the gates.” Alex told the gate keepers, who were perched at the top of the gate. The doors were slowly opening.

“Go on. Your father is waiting for you down there.”

I slowly walked down pass the gates. I saw a dark, clammy, fiery cave. Just like in my dreams. I continued to walk down the cave. For what, yet again, seemed like hours. I finally came upon the ending. I saw a huge thrown with a man on it. The man had silky, long black hair, crimson, calculating eyes, pale skin, and small horns protruding from his head, lean muscles and the appearance of a thirty year old man.

“Welcome.” he said

“Who are you?” I asked

“You know who I am, Jin.”

“Ya, I do.”

“I had Alex bring you here a little earlier than expected. You were supposed to come here on your sixteenth birthday but I couldn’t risk you getting killed.”

“Killed, why would anyone want to kill me? I haven’t done anything wrong.”

“Well, because most people didn’t want you born. Your mother had died giving birth to you. Her dying wish was to live a normal life as long as you could. But I can’t do this job forever you know. Everybody thinks that I can do this till the end of time but I can’t. I want you to take over for me. I want you to rule hell. Only someone from my blood line can do this. So I am asking you as your father to do this. Will you do this?”

“This place would be a wreck if I didn’t huh?”

“More than likely”

“All right, I’ll do it.”

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This is how my rein in hell started. It took me awhile to get use to it but that is a tale for another time. So, who knows, I might see you here one day. Here in the realm of the damned.




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