I miss spell alot so sorry.. sweatdrop
Linda opened her soft, brown eyes only to see that their was nothing their. She was just floting in a black obese. It was so confertable that she felt like she could lay there forever. Then a light flashed and she started to fall. Only she wasn’t falling deeper into the darkness. Linda found herself going up instead of down. As she continued to “fall” she could feel water betting against her skin. She was never in a black obese. I was only the ocean. Black was quickly changing into blue.
As she continued her ascent she could see all the ocean life around her. They were all moving out of her way making a path to the surface. She tried to see the creatures that so kindly let her through. All see could see was a blue whale, a dolphin, a shark, a seal, an eel, a tuna, and a clown fish. When she finally was almost at the top she saw a man.
The man seemed much older then she was. His hair was a bright red. So bright that Linda believed that she would be able to see it from miles. As she got closer she could she his eyes. They were blue. A deep dark blue that almost looked like the ocean its self.
“help us” the man said in a deep calm voice.
Linda almost tried to answer him but she felt something push her. She then could feel the warm blaket on top of her and her soft bed under neith. Even thing came back. She was only dreaming and her mom would ask her to wake up in 3...2...1...
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Linda opened her soft, brown eyes only to see that there was nothing there. She was just floating in a black abyss. It was so comfortable that she felt like she could lay there forever. Then, a light flashed and she started to fall; only, she wasn’t falling deeper into the darkness. Linda found herself going up instead. As she continued to “fall,” she could feel water beating against her skin. She was never in a black abyss. It was only the ocean. Black was quickly changing into blue.
As she continued her ascent, she could see all the ocean life around her. They were all moving out of her way, making a path to the surface. She tried to see the creatures that so kindly aided her passage, but all she could see was a blue whale, a dolphin, a shark, a seal, an eel, a tuna, and a clown fish. When she finally reached the uppermost layers of the undersea realm, she saw a man.
The man seemed much older then Linda. His hair was a bright red;so bright that Linda believed she would be able to see it from miles away. As she got closer, she could see his eyes. They were blue. A deep, dark blue that almost looked like the ocean itself.
“Help us,” the man said in a deep calm voice.
Linda tried to answer him, but she suddenly felt something push her. She then felt the warm blanket on top of her, and her soft bed under her body. Every thing came stumbling back. She was merely dreaming, and her mom would tell her to wake up in 3...2...1...
there's an edited version if you like! 4laugh
so many typos....... eek