^ Me being genuinely unintelligent.
Okay. OKAY!
I'm going to respond as I read the post, so I don't really have time to mull over what you've said and how you've interpreted things.
Baha I don't have any poorly written doujinshi's. Only quality s**t is allowed here.
"..it kind of denies the characters the human fragility you capture with your writing." And with this sentence I have fallen in love with you.
Yes. Okay, I guess I'll have to elaborate a little. You see, my interpretation of wishshipping is that it's a very delicate, hesitant relationship. I don't think that Honda and Ryuuji would be very accepting of learning that Jou and Yugi were together, and they constantly feel this pressure to hide what they felt; to keep it just as a mutual friendship so that the rest of the group remained as it was.
To me, Jounouchi is very emotionally stunted. It's a little headcanon of mine. His father is an alcoholic; his mother left, and the only real family he cares for is his sister. He's just so absolutely terrified of the thought of feeling more than friendship for his friend. It's like watching a romantic movie; the woman doesn't date the man she's been friends with; and no less would the romantic movie be about two men.
He's at a complete loss.
Now I see why adorned would be a rather unfitting adjective to use here; it makes Yugi sound like an item in a household. "Do they weigh on him?" YES. THANK YOU SO MUCH.
Wow I have an idea for that now.
I'm glad you liked the park scene, hah. I just had an image of that; of the two of them huddled together on a park bench, freezing, for days. I had to write it, it wouldn't LEAVE ME ALONE.
Ah good, you picked up on the foreshadowing I left! I was trying to leave the segments that separated the flashbacks rather short and as blunt and non-descriptive as possible. It would ruin it if I didn't. Granted, you're not stupid, and you know of my absolute love for tragedy, so I'm sure you've guessed it already.
Wow that sentence (with the alliteration) was actually completely unintentional, bahah. I'm glad to know that you think it's nice and I'm trying to keep my composure so as to not look like a complete idiot and it's failing damn.
Hahaha yeah! I saw a couple of typo's only AFTER I sent it to you so I was sort of dying inside.
askjdhaks I hope I don't disappoint you!
I wrote about 850 words at school, and there's still more to go, heheh.
I'll be sure to send you a link/post it on tumblr when I finish! It's a shame that most people don't like wishshipping (or read the fanfiction, since it's a (pile of s**t most of the time.)
Once again thanks so much for reading it and telling me your thoughts aslkdh
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