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HA! To any and all readers, Instead of putting up my next chapter I am going to put up an INTERLUDE! MUWAHAHAHA!


It is about the begining of creation for this world.

To any religious folks- I apologize I am not using your Deity(s) and your bible or whatever you have.

My world my rules, its all fake anyways (I mean my world is fake, we already knew yours was too, but I just figured I'd throw that out there)

This/these book/writing/other things do not in any way have any of my beliefs, if you for some stupid reason think they do, please stop reading, this is not the devil's work this is mine and mine alone, and I don't want your rantings and hate.

Now if your here to tell me what you think about my book, and you think it just flat out sucks, I want that hate.

that kind of hate is good, especially if you can tell me WHAT you don't like and how I could change it.

I may or may not change it for you, I am more likely to change it if you give me longer descriptions, and if you give me a paragraph of reasons and possibilities I will be overjoyed.

If its not hate but love for my book, than the best I can say is thank you, and expect it out on the shelves within the next two years..

Given how long it's taking this book to progress, I am expecting to make a minimum of two books in this series, there will be many off shoots, but Alastar gets two books. I may sell the first book when I am about half way done with book two, maybe later, depends. So within the next two years ^_^

plus I won't put the entire book on Gaia, I am still trying to decide what chapter to stop posting at, I was thinking chapter 10, because after chapter ten things really get going. but then I thought maybe slightly later...

Now without further ado, the interlude, the creation of the universe;

In the beggining there were only five things in existance, two beings, one named Chaos, and the other Ordus, they were very joyous beings, and loved eachother as brothers very much. They felt only one emotion at the time, and that was the third thing in existance, an entity known as Merriment. The last things in existance were two energy types, each controlled by one of the brothers, but named by the opposite brother. One energy was called Order, named by Chaos who named it after Ordus, the other was Chaos, since Ordus was not imaginative he could only think of Chaos, and thus named it after him.

Though Ordus and Chaos got along Merrily, their energy types did not. There was a line in between the two energies, and this line was Merriment. Occassionally the two beings would send a wave of their energy to the other side, when Merriment was not looking. They learned quickly that when a certain ammount of energy mixed other things could be made.

The first things that were created were named by Chaos and Ordus as emotions. These emotions did not get along at all. Many times they would attempt to destroy either eachother or themselves. When the emotions were made Ordus and Chaos learned they had "feelings" and learned that as long as these emotions stayed alive so did these feelings. Originally there were thousands of emotions, but many were destroyed, and with them the feelings they instilled. Eventually Chaos learned to form beings with his own energy, and thus Spite, pain, destruction, and malevolence was created. Ordus later learned he too could create his own, and with them came honor, loyalty, friendship, and joy.

Merriment grew angry, and from Merriment came anger and rage, who were far more powerful than anything Chaos and Ordus had made. This scared the two beings. One day the two brothers decided that the emotions were becoming too powerful and getting out of hand. Together they made love and hate and set them out on the other emotions.

Hate ripped all the other emotions in half, and love split them evenly between the two. After all the emotions had been absorbed they returned to Chaos and Ordus, changed forever. They forced the two entities to absorb them too. Chaos and Ordus would never be the same, as the emotions and feelings grew stronger inside them, and tore the two apart.

Finally a battle broke out between the two, and they were both equally as powerful, finally Ordus decided to absorb all of Chaos into himself, and broke the barrier between the two energies. With the barrier broken the two energies combined and cause an amazing explosion, which than destroyed merriment, and in her place left a strange thing,which the two called Earth. The energy had combined into a million universes. each on expanding on into infinity.

With the universes came a group of beings that titled themselves the Titans. These beings than decided to create their own beings, wich they called gods. The Titans were happy with their creations, and they began creating many more things, such as planets or galaxies. Many never returned to Earth.

One day the Titans grew displeased with the original two beings. Chaos and Ordus had been fighting for eternity, a concept which the gods had created, time. The titans one day tricked Chaos, making him believe that Inside every planet that the Titans had made, there was power enough to destroy Ordus, and thus Chaos became the fire inside the planets.

The Titans then focused on Ordus, who had become confused when he could no longer find and absorb Chaos. They told him Chaos resided outside of the oververse, what they had named the groups of universes. With that Ordus was trapped outside of the Oververse.

With Chaos split into millions of peices and inside each planet, and Ordus trapped around the Oververse, expanding himself around it trying to find a hole, the Titans became happy. With the Titans happiness they decided to create their own rules, and created two more beings that went hand in hand with chaos and order. They had created good and evil. These new creations, rules, good, and evil caused much squabbling amongst the Titans, and finally the gods grew tired of their fighting, and trapped the ones they could find.

With the gods the only beings left, they began to bicker amongst themselves who would rule. There came one god whose name is even to this day unknown, and he spoke "we do not need to fight amongst ourselves, we can all rule, but if there must be fighting let others do it for us, and with that the races of Earth began.

...and with that time had truely started.






EDIT: a quick explantation-
I few thigns were brought up either by me after I read or by another friend who had read this.

1:All things are shapeless until the destruction of everything, it is to be assumed everything is a simple mass, except Merriment, who is the shape of a flower, and if you were to see the wall it would be like a vine, a tendril. Merriment is pure green, chaos is red, Chaos is pink, order is white, and Ordus is blue.

2:Before the energies chaos and order are blown up, Chaos and Ordus are extremely powerful, afterwords, they are much weaker, but still nothing is stronger than them. The only thing that was ever more powerful was Merriment, because instead of having an energy sorrounding it like Chaos and Ordus, Merriment was its own energy, the reason it dies is because its energy is spread very thin, and the flower part is destroyed.

3: this does not describe the seperation of the magic from our world into the new world. That will be in an interlude later ^_^ yep there will be more! HA!

4:No the nameless god is not the Christian god, yes I am using pantheons from our world (Zues, Loki, Bast, etc.) Yes they all leave with the magic, but a few gods stay behind (I.e Christian God, Buddha, the Dagda, etc.)

5: Anger and Rage literally mutated out of Merriment, the same way a certain beautiful goddess sprang from Zues's head ^_^

6 biggrin on't you just love how hate rips the other emotions in half, and the only thing Love does is give one half to Hate and the other half to itself? lol

7: need anything else? Please say something!!!!