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GoGreenForMonkeys
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I stood at the edge of the cliff.
The high winds blew my jet black hair to the side.
My leaf green eyes watered at the winds whipping like a whip.
Thunder rolled in the distance like a fading echo.
Lightning bolted nearby, its dangerous white fingers poking down, edging into claws at the end with a yellow glow.
The deep full moon sat in the sky, its glowing white one of the only things completely visible in the twilight darkness.
But I could see fine.
The moon cast shadows on everything,
giving a ghostly look.
I looked down.
The river raged at the bottom.
There were no weeds near its shore,
for the never ending strong flows would carry them far away.
Any animal that dared to drink from it would have to have strong balance not to fall.
Also a strong muzzle to keep from being pulled under.
But i was daring enough to stand at this crumbling cliff.
The orange sand was once rock,
but is crumbling.
It could collapse at any given moment.
I looked down.
And i knew where to go.
I brought up my strength.
This is my first time doing this.
Time seemed to stop.
Even the miles fast winds slowed down to a breeze.
I took a deep breath and jumped.
Right into the river.
And i disappeared right under,
hitting my target...

Right before i hit the water, i took a deep breath.
Then i hit right into the center.
The icy cold water chilled me to the bone.
The raging waters threatened to sweep me away.
But i wasn't.
My hair fell around my eyes, blinding me in a swarm of jet black.
Then again, i couldnt see in this dark water.
But i did see a rock.
I hit the rock.
I did not feel pain.
The rock slid past me.
And i teleported right into it.

I landed in a bright room.
The sudden light shocked me.
I wasnt wet anymore.
I was pure dry, Not a drop of the icy cold water.
And the room was warm.
Not like air conditioner.
Not sticky warm like a hot summer day.
Its like when you just enter a warm car that was left in the sun.
Warm.
Warmth wrapped around me, and i almost fell asleep to it.
I looked around.
My father had told me to come here, because someone wanted me.
So here i am.
Where is the somebody?
I had incredible hearing.
It was strange.
I heard a draw of something going back.
I heard a string.
Oh no.

I spun around.
I saw a bow and arrow.
Aimed to my throat.
Someone had a gun to my back,
i could hear its metallic clicking.
"Get in the plane." the man with the bow said.
What was i to do?
The arrow had a sharp shark tooth on it.
It was red.
With blood.
So i stepped in the plane...


The plane was cold.
Even colder than the chilled river.
Even colder than...
Freezing.
The plane was small.
Way too small.
I looked around.
The plane had pure white walls.
Except for...
The red.

Smears of it.
Blood smears.
Was i going to be...
No! I thought.
Thats not going to happen.
Father sent me here.
He would never do this.
But he was a poor man.

The memory of him hit my mind,
Like a nerve wracking shock.
His sandy blond hair.
His gray eyes.
He was a poor man.
Would he send me to these men,
For money?

I shuddered.
No.
It would not happen.
The plane has taken off hours ago.
Then i saw one smear that looked different.
Its blood seemed new.
There,
clear in the wall.
Was writing.
And the writing said:

How will you survive?
Will you survive?
If you came onto this plane,
Be prepared to live in the wild.
You will need to beat all the others,
To win.
If you loose,
You will be killed,
Agonizingly...

I did not read the last parts.
So i was going to be,
shoved into the wild?
Oh no!
Then the men came out.
I realized the plane had stopped.
They looked at me and said one sentence in unison.
"Get out, Time to survive."


My eyes went wide at the sudden darkness. The plane had LED lights. Now this was complete darkness. I was scared. I heard the engines of the plane go off as they left me. I might as well try to figure out what was going on. I walked slowly. I couldnt see well. Even the moon seemed to disappear. All that i could barely see with was a glowing cloud. The moon was hidden behind that cloud.
There was a mist. A humid mist. I tried to walk out of the mists way, but i felt trees all surrounding me. And when i managed to free from the mist, it was freezing. I felt a bit of water on the trees. Frozen. I thought i was getting the hang of this darkness thing. Plus, i think i see the sky getting gray. Morning will be coming soon. Then i tripped on a branch.

I stumbled forward. I crashed into bushes. I started running to keep up with myself from falling. Then i was sprinting.
Then i tripped on a snake hole.

I fell forward. I was falling, falling down a huge hill.
I hit frozen, ice covered sharp rocks. I felt pain stab me, and the warm blood run down my leg. Then i hit a huge rock.
I was thrown into the air. I felt cold under me.
I then hit ice with a huge crack.

I heard cracking all over. Like the crack of an old bone.
Then i felt ice crack under my hand.
Then i fell into the ice, in a almost trauma...

I landed on my feet. It sent immediate shocks up my spine from hitting the ground so hard on my feet. My feet should have stung. It didnt hurt. Weird. Then i slipped. I landed on my back. But the thing was i wasnt feeling much pain. Weird. Then i finally got up. I saw peering eyes all over. What was this weird ice place? The ice was like a blue glass. Beautiful. Like diamonds. I traced over engravings in the ice. Then i saw strange new words.
LOOK BEHIND YOU.

I spun around and saw a group of hungry people. One hissed "Another mouth to feed? We can barely feed ourselves!" I heard
a slapping sound. Then silence. They all looked at me. My eyes widened. Then they all looked at me. Their eyes suddenly turned a blood red. One stepped forward. He raised his hand. In his hand was a shiny metal thing. Then i heard the clicking. Then he raised the GUN.

He growled. Then i heard him say "One LESS mouth to feed."
Then he shot.
But i did not feel any pain.


I woke up gasping. I looked around. It was all a dream.
I walked into the kitchen.
Father was there.
Then he told me
"Go to the teleportation cliff. Then jump into the water. Theres two men who want to talk to you."




 
 
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