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Poetry and Life
If you do read my journal with my poems, please, and I mean Please, post a comment on wha you think about them to let me know what you really actually think about them, cause I need to know if they are any good to publish =]
Lifted
As I look up at these stars,
I start to think really hard.
Is our love really that strong?
Has it really lasted this this long?
My heart says she is the best,
even though I feel like a mess.
My mind runs wild about her,
as I walk by every turn.
My body feels as thought it can dance,
as if it was the last chance.
I spend all my time on this world,
thinking about that only girl.
She's a girl in my life,
that I would love to be my wife.
She's a girl a girl I want to be with alone,
a girl I want to see at home.
There is just one thing,
that gives my heart a little sting.
Will we always be together?
Forever and ever?
I believe we will,
and I mean this for real.
As my heart tells me and sing,
she's my other wing.






User Comments: [4]
Pink_Bomb_Diggity_28
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 @ 11:00pm


aweeee carlos this is beautiful..it has such meaning and warmth to it..your so very very talented i love this one


SilentStar65
Community Member





Thu Apr 15, 2010 @ 11:26pm


This sounds really wonderful, very deep you have a gift to write whats in your heart ^^ heart


iiAngels_Devil
Community Member





Fri Apr 16, 2010 @ 02:43am


i'm really glad you wrote this hun! smile it makes me think of a few things! smile blaugh heart


Ona660
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Sun Apr 18, 2010 @ 02:23am


Aw~!This is really sweet! ^^ *I told you i'd evently read some of these razz *


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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