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~poem~ keep moving forward, thats what they told me to do, i really tried too. but what they dont know, is that im stuck in the dark, depressed with waiting. for someone to come, and save me from my sad life, i dont like it here head hurts, mind racing cant think straight, cant concentrate gotta keep going gotta keep running cant stop, never gonna stop dotta keep moving cant get stuck again though im still in my dark whole trying to get out cant find an escape deserately looking for one but i cant find it

Posted by: sweet_midnight_flower Sat Mar 06, 2010 @ 05:49am

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Animorpha
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Fri Mar 19, 2010 @ 04:43am

I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL!
AWESOME! heart

GambitLovesWatchmen
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Fri Mar 19, 2010 @ 07:41am

Keep moving forward,
and even if there seems liek there is nothing to move forward to,
if you keep walking, eventually you'll find something.
becuase leave everything in the past and find new paths
becuase you cant go any direction but forward wink

i like it
Its a very DEEP and emotional poem, i use the saying KEEP MOVING FORWARD
and alot of people usually think this (your poem) when i tell them it
its very sad and you can feel the sadness in it
VERY POWERFUL

Mitsukai Sabishii
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Sat Mar 20, 2010 @ 04:35pm

Nice

Raia-sWill
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Mon Mar 22, 2010 @ 01:45am

seems more like a song to me even though those are poems…… but i just feel like there should be an instrumental accompaniment also i think the whole/hole that you want is the pit so its spelt hole*

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