I wanted to write a poem about somthing other than love so here's one on something else.
please critque, constructive critisism PLEASE puppy dog stare arrow emo
Sky
Tell us what do you see? What you know of skies above
Tales of gods and heroes Eternal maps forever etched, white on black
New worlds hidden wishes written, black canvas, white ink
Soaring stars Falling, falling Until something is reached, something is found What was lost? What should be found?
Meanings sullied, fading black Morals twisted, dripping ink
So tell us what you see? Tell us what you know?
Because all I see is white ink, black canvas White stars, black sky White on black
But what am I to say? What do I know, For these are the opinions not of the smart or the wise These are opinions of a hand and brush
blindfoldedBandit · Sat Aug 29, 2009 @ 03:07am · 1 Comments |