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These are some of my poems/songs/whateva.. Enjoy...
Too Much Touch

It's all so wrong
And all for naught

We live for so long
Until we get caught

You read my mind
Fed me all your lies

I've been much too kind
Now just watch me rise

Heaven Whispers in my ear
and hell just holds on tighter

You are who I fear
I can't fight this fire

Now comes the rain
It will wash away

All my horrid pain
and get me through today

You were all I had left
My heart beats no more

Now go ahead, burn the rest
I'll walk away beaten and sore

Too much touch
and no revenge

Too much rush
and no contnet.

Leave me be my angel now
And let me fly to hell and die.

Too much touch
and no revenge.






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DeadAngelDiva
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 29, 2009 @ 08:13am
you are quite the poet my friend. i really enjoyed this.


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 29, 2009 @ 08:30am
It has a beautiful deep message to it.
But at the same time, I get a soft softness coming from it, something tender and frail.
I love works like these, that touch me in odd ways.
You do very god work, keep it up!



Issac Amano
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Little Miss Scarypants
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 29, 2009 @ 11:20pm
i likie this ones...so dark..oo..me likie a lot. heart


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 29, 2009 @ 11:58pm
really cool i like it



Aquamarie95
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Tinkerlex
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 01, 2009 @ 02:01am
You have such a wonderful mind.
For some reason I've read this one three times now.
`tis great, love.


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 04, 2009 @ 08:21am
This one made me contemplate...



_xPuella
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