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My Journal Of Daily Happenings Or Random Crap
I like writing about things that happen that somehow impact my life, though online, I tend to keep away from things too personal.
Done?
This girl you see is nothing to who I see.
A cold girl with nothing to lose and nothing to gain.
With the cold heart with a ice cold key.
Your heart blood to her is nothing but a stain

Would you see the darkness on the outside or in?
Can you separate prayer from sin?
Not many can with this perfectly crafted mask.
Drinking from the love rusted flask

This thief of the heart is hurting herself day by day.
Knowing deep inside she wished the feeling would stay.
But things change and people fade
Love does fair and hardly ever stayed.

Do you wish for her to wait upon this tombstone?
Dawn and dusk till all is gone except the bone?
Not she, she waits for no one.
For what is done is done.



"♥ Music = Life. Simple As That. Because No Matter What Happens It'll Never Hurt You. ♥"




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akuma616
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 26, 2009 @ 09:06am
Wow.... This is.... Amazing...


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 26, 2009 @ 11:02pm
Good Poem, ^^. Is this one of your more recent poems, as it is superior to your t3h other one you posted. I don't know if t3h meter was perfect but its not that kind of poem, it reads nicely and the content is fairly ambiguous without being cliche which is a good sign. Good work.


I swear to Scandinavian drunks, I'm not an Ethiopian princess.

phililup
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djchriscoyne
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 05, 2009 @ 11:35pm
dang very hart felt heart crying im sorry ...... question


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