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Furuba Cinderella
I'd like explain that I was bored out of my mind and just decided to make a parody story. Basiclly this is what it is....I was looking around on Deviantart and found a Fruits Basket drawing titled "Cinderella". So I decided to do that.....but modified for my own enjoyment. Here are the characters:
Cinderella=Yuki
Prince Charming=Tohru
Wicked Stepmother=Akito
Wicked Stepsister #1=Motoko Minagawa
Wicked Stepsister #2=Minami Kinoshita
Grand Duke=Makoto Takei
King=Hatsuharu
Queen=Rin
Fairy Godmother=Kagura

Enjoy! Remember this is a oneshot, so it might be crappy but oh well. Oh and I'm more used to Akito being a guy so he's a guy in this. P.S. In reality, I respect the canon pairing of Tohru/Kyo. It's just Yuki seems like the perfect Cinderella and I haven't known Machi that long yet. And I know how Yuki's parents really treat him. The mother that liked him is just for the story, unfortunately. Oh well.

WARNINGS: Crappy author (in author's opinion) and some cross-dressing.
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Part 2: The Fairy Godmother

Yuki walked out to the garden. He stared at the garden bench underneath the sakura tree. He remembered when he was a child, he and his mother would play out here for hours on end. 'Mother...' he thought. He lifted his arm and stared at what was left of the suit he thought he would go to the ball in.
A tear rolled down his cheek as he knelt down and placed his head against the bench. 'Mother....why'd you have to leave me so alone like this?' he thought before he buried his face in his arms and sobbed. With every tear he cried, he began to sob even harder.
Suddenly, he felt a hand carressing his hair. He jerked his head up and saw a young woman smiling down at him. "Don't cry, child." she said. Yuki's eyes widened. "Wh-Who're you?" he asked her. The woman smiled again and said, "My name's Kagura. I'm your fairy godmother."
Yuki came close to laughing but stopped himself. He didn't want to anger the woman that was comforting him. "Wh-why would you want to associate with someone as pathetic as me?" he asked. Kagura did not like this one bit and whacked him on the head with her wand. "Ow!" Yuki yelped. "You are not pathetic!" Kagura said sternly. "You're beautiful in your own special way."
Yuki was touched by this statement, but hastily wiped away the oncoming tears. "Oh, don't cry, dear." Kagura said soothingly. "You shouldn't have to deal with them. They're the pathetic ones. And they'll get what they deserve one day. This I promise you."
That did it. Yuki let his head rest on Kagura's lap and he began to sob again. Kagura stroked Yuki's hair and told him, "Don't cry, child. There are people that care for you. Me, for instance." For a few minutes, Yuki just continued to cry, slowly being soothed by Kagura's kind words.
Eventually, Yuki became calm. "Thank you." he told her. "Your welcome." Kagura said. She stood and pulled Yuki onto his feet. "Now we should get going." "Where?" Yuki asked, completely dumbstruck. "The ball, silly!" Kagura giggled, playfully sticking her tounge out at him.
That's when Kagura finally noticed what he was wearing. "Oh, you look dreadful!" she gasped. "They did this?" Yuki sighed and hung his head, nodding sadly. "Well, lemme fix that." Kagura got her wand out again and twirled it in the air a bit. The wand began to sparkle and fell back into Kagura's outstreched hand.
She mumbled some words that Yuki couldn't understand and waved it towards him. The rags that hung over his body were pulled from his body and reformed around him to form a grand, elaborate ball gown. "Yeah, sorry." Kagura said with a sweatdrop running down her head. "I don't have anything else on me." Yuki shrugged and said, "Oh well." Yuki twirled a bit but accidently stepped on the skirt of his gown and fell over.
Yuki pushed himself back up and laughed nervously. He stopped when he noticed his shoes. They were beautiful. They were glass heels that had gold and silver trim around the opening of it. "How beautiful." he said.
Kagura helped him back on his feet and said, "Now if you're going to a ball, you need a fancy set of wheels." She looked around and saw Yuki's 'secret base'. This year, he was growing pumpkins. A smile crossed Kagura's face. "Perfect." she said to herself. "You don't mind, do you?" "Mind what?" Yuki asked, slightly confused.
Kagura took that as a yes and mumbled the same foreign words, waving her wand towards the pumpkin. The pumpkin pulled itself from the ground and floated towards them a bit. It rested on the ground and suddenly grew in size, turning white at the same time. Wheels magically appeared and connected to the new carriage to finish it.
"Almost done." Kagura said, taking another look around. Yuki was completely dumbfounded. He stared at the brand new carriage in absolute amazement. Kagura saw a pack of mice around the sakura tree, mumbled those foreign words and waved the wand towards them.
The mice suddenly transformed into beautiful white stallions and Kagura hooked them to the carriage. "Two more things." Kagura said. "We need a driver and a coachman." Kagura saw the family dog and a horse in its stable. She enchanted them and they transformed into humans. The horse manned the front of the carriage and the dog was the coachman.
Yuki was completely amazed. "Ta-da!" Kagura giggled. "Done! Now you can go to the ball in style!" Yuki smiled at Kagura and gave her a huge hug. "Thank you so much, Kagura!" he told her over and over. "Yeah, but unfortunately, there's a catch." Kagura said sadly. Yuki pulled back and gave her a worried look.
"See, I'm a beginner at some magic. So, this will all stay..........until the clock strikes midnight. Then you gotta get your butt back here. I'm sorry." Yuki just shook his head. "It's fine." he said. "Thank you." Kagura smiled and created a tiara out of thin air. She placed it upon his head and kissed his forehead. "You have a good time at the ball, ok?" she told him.
"I will." Yuki smiled, a tear of happiness forming in his eye. "Now, go and get to that ball, before midnight." Kagura said, pushing Yuki into the carriage. As it drove off, Yuki leaned out of the window and waved to Kagura. Kagura waved back, slowly fading away. Yuki watched in surprise as Kagura vanished magiclly.
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Yeah, I refuse to have Kagura doing the Bippity Boppity Boo thing. Sorry. Just.....no.
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