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Key's Favorite poem Might not be that good but HEY! I'm still Learning. << " No matter what it takes.. I will not fail, nor bail. You won't see me fall to my knee's wheeping with the breeze As long as i'm by your side, It keeps me on my feet. I will protect you.. I will not fail, and i shall never bail.."

Posted by: Key of the Universe Thu May 14, 2009 @ 03:48am

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Sat May 16, 2009 @ 01:31am

Not bad ^^ i completely suck at poetry gonk sweatdrop
not sure bout the line "wheeping with the breeze". And maybe reword stuff here and there. I dont think bail should be on a line by itself =/ that's just my opinion though ^^ are yuu gonna start writing more poetry? =O

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