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MY CRAZYNESS!
I have ALOT 2 say! heres my words from my own writting! BEWARE OF HATERS!
Kill me Chapter 1
I honestly don't know how this happened. How I cam to be here. Then again when do I ever know? But what girl expects to floating over her own body? Blood is pouring out of me and staining my clothes. Before we even begin to figure out how this came to be, you must know that somethings I in my life may make you mad or hate me. Just know I never meant any of it
Chapter 1
The alarm next to my head goes off. I put a cut wrist out to hit the 'snooze' button. Next door I can hear my mom getting out of bed. I roll over and pray to god it's her and not my step dad, Mark.
My prayers aren't answered. Mark walks in and rubs my lower back. I flinch away. By doing so I hit my head on the bed table. Mark laughs and walks out.
"Nice knowing you are alert for me darling." He laughs once more.
I groan and fling back my black covers. I slowly make my way over to the closet. I pull out a black tank top with Emily the Strange on it. Next to it are cargo pants with suspenders attached.I get dressed and make my way downstairs.
"Morning" I mumble to my mom as I grab an apple. My car keys are on the key tree and I grab them. I all but run out of the house.
Its a 20 minuet drive to my high school, Fells(home of the Falcons. Yay.). I drive up and get a space next to the cafiteria doors. My brain clicks. "Welcome to hell" I say to myself.


Heyy Guys Its Mara! This is a new story I am working on. Its not the end of the first chapter yet. Critisism is cool. I am still play out with this character. She basically wakes up and she is floating over her own body. I am still adding and stuffz. I am going to use people from my life only with different names. Keep a look out for your own personality or a name that sounds like yours. Thankz for reading and I will keep adding! Please let me know if you want me to continue by comment or PM. If not I will take it as I shouldn't repost more!
~Mara!~



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Tapeworm Sex
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 10, 2009 @ 09:30pm
That looks pretty good so far mara keep it up


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 11, 2009 @ 12:20am
Absolutely keep writing! Every good writer might have the times where they can't write for a long time. That my dear friend is writer's block. One of my worst enemies as a writer. Just make sure that you can write in the same intellegent way every time. If not, it starts to seem like a different writer.



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Bunker312
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 16, 2009 @ 11:52am
Wow, it seems like it will be an amazing story. Keep writing hun. biggrin


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 05, 2009 @ 11:10pm
It's pretty good. You need to make comma marks and put question marks too when your asking a question. Other than that, It's well done ^^



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