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I have decided to rewrite my prologue. Thoes of you who liked it as is...well... Sorry. ^^ It isn't going to be too much different. Just adding more details that I need to put in.

Dark purple rain clouds rolled in blocking the beautiful setting sun. The vanishing light lingered on a figure standing at the edge of the woods. The woman was facing the clearing, The dark green leaves of the trees around her did nothing to hide what she could see. Tears streamed down her pale face.
She knew she should just turn and leave, pretend nothing happened. Try to live day by day knowing what has happened and to pretend... Pretend it never did. But her feet just wouldn't seem to listen to her. She couldn't make them move. She ended up rooted to the spot, listening, watch, damming herself.
Her shaky legs gave out on her and she feel to her knees. A soft sob escaping with every moan and scream coming from the clearing. He left her. Betrayed her. The rain started coming down as a drizzle and picked up in speed. She continued to kneel there in the mud forming around her body. She could still hear them. They were leaving the clearing. One went the way that lead deeper into the forest, or was it both. She couldn't tell. She didn't want to know.
Time seemed to have just stood still for her, everything was spinning at a speed she didn't like. She heard a soft gasp to her left. She lifted her head and looked up at his beautiful face, the face of the man who left her. "Namii... Why are you here?"
Namii stood up and turned her face to the faling rain, with this she was sure he couldn't tell if she was crying or if it was just the rain. Her golen brown hair dulled to a coppery color with the rain, it stuck to her face from the rain as well as her tears. "Answer me Namii! Why are you here? I told you I would be right back! So why did you follow me here?" He reached out and grabbed her arm, yanking on it to pull her away from the clearing he just came out of.
She pulled back, barely moving at all. He turned to look at her, "I followed you because I was worried. But now, I just can't stay with you... Good-bye Jen." She yanked her arm out of his grasp and backed away at first to see if he would attempt to stop her.He just stood there wacthing her go, so she turned around and kept on walking.
Suddenly the leaves started to shake with more force than what the rain could cause. Namii's head snapped up as a low rummbling sound started from behind her and grew louder. She spun on the spot to see a deep fault line in the ground. Panic swelled through her as the ground started to drop away into a black casum. She attempted to make it back to stable land, but it seemed like fate was having fun with her this day, the ground dropped away completely before she was able to take more than one step.
She struck out her arm. Maybe if she streached it far enough she could reach it! Her fingers missed by an inch and she fell, down in to the hole. But before she could fall to far, she saw Jen's face, full of panic and worry. She smiled a smile that showed she was done, giving up. "Bye, Jin." She wispered as he disappered from her sight.
Far above her just as she lost conciousness she heard him cry out her name, pain laced in his voice, "Namii!"