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Kiss on the stomach = "I'm ready"
Kiss on the Forehead = "I hope we're together forever"
Kiss on the Ear = "You're my everything"
Kiss on the Cheek = "We're friends"
Kiss on the Hand = "I adore you"
Kiss on the Neck = "we belong together"
Kiss on the Shoulder = "I want you"
Kiss on the Lips = "I love you"

What the gesture means...
Holding Hands = "we definitely love each other"
Slap on the Butt = "That's mine"
Holding on tight = "I don't want to let go"
Looking into each other's Eyes = "I just plain love you"
Playing with Hair = "Tell me you love me"
Arms around the Waist = "I love you too much to let go"
Laughing while Kissing = "I am completely comfortable with you"
picking someone up off their feet = "that they love them fully and would do anything for them"


Fierce_Tigress
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My lovers arms
There aren't enough stars in the sky,
To show how many times,
I've wished for you.
There aren't enough places in the world,
To show how far,
I'd really go for you.
I'd give anything to be with you,
Lay my life on the line,
Just to spend one more moment with you.
I would die a thousand deaths,
To feel you at my side,
To know that we're together once again.
Nothing can tear us apart,
Even when we are both in death,
We will always be together,
Sharing our adventures.
If I could fall into your arms,
Those strong limbs which seem to be my shield against harm,
My purpose would be complete.
Even now as I look at you,
I still can't believe,
That God has sent you to me.
I have done nothing special to deserve you,
But He grazed your soul with a touch of His heavenly hand,
Which has now made my life whole.
So, my love,
Let me tell you in no words,
How much you mean to me.
Nothing in this world,
Can add up to how much I love you.
So let it now be known,
That this is the moment,
I can finally be yours,
As you will be mine.





User Comments: [1]
Havatara
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 @ 05:12pm


I think it's a pretty good poem, except things are stated a bit too bluntly. In the future, try to have more adjetives, adverbs, similes, metaphors, hyperbolies (ok, i know i spelt that wrong), personification, things like that. Maybe even try using dialect.


User Comments: [1]
 
 
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