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The Haunting of Dead Venus
this is a story (written in poetry form and yes i will make some short stories and stuff to go with it too.) about a girl named Venus who was killed by a gang. she did not leave this earth though as she is simply just a spirit. they do not suspect he
T_TXXSad StoryXXT_T
There wuz a girl and there was a boy....

*doorbell rings*

Girl answers

Girl:"Hey."

Boy:"Hey, i wuz just needing to talk to you."

Girl frowns.

Girl:"Okay........ come on in then."

*Girl and boy both go up to the girl's room*

They both sit down.

Girl:"so what's up?!?"

Boy:"Well, my grandmas, in the hospital right now. she has liver cancer."

Girl:"oh! im so sorry your grandma."

Boy:"Kay, its alright, well i guess i should go now."

Boy leaves

At home, the boy has a heart attack. He is rushed to the hospital and put on oxegen and life support. The boy's mother calls the girl.

Girl:"Hello?!?!"

Boy's mom:" hey um you no travis(the boy), well um he had a heart attack and is in the hospital right now. hes been saying he needed to call you and talk to you. but i wont let him touch the phone."

Girl: "okay, well ill come over then. see ya."

*girl hangs up.*

She rushes to the hospital and find his room. when she enters she hear sobbing noises coming from inside.

Girl:" Whats wrong?" she runs up to the boy and kisses him.

Boy's mom:" there going to cut off his oxegen and life support in about two hours. He not going to make it."

Girl:" oh my god! This cant be happening!!!" she started to let out low sobbs, then they got louder. she walked up to the boy and kissed him fiercily.

Boy:" i lied about my grandma. The truth is i have heart disease and i didnt want you to be afraid and scared if you knew. Im sorry it has to end like this. but ill meet you in heaven someday. i love you."

Girl: "I love you too." she said and started crying again. A tear landed on the boy's heart.

The boy lays back down, but doesnt take his eyes off of his girlfriend.

Later that day, a young boy died. Soon after, the following day, a girl was found in a sewer, stabbed to death and bleeding, with a bullet in her heart and head. It was the sam girl. who had wanted so bad to see her beloved one again, that she died for him.

THE END.

(I HOPE YOU ENJOYED!! I REMEMBER ALL OF THESE SAD STORIES ARE MADE-UP BY ME!!!)






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KG-awesome
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commentCommented on: Fri Feb 06, 2009 @ 02:07pm
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