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YAY!!!!
.....
I am writing a story...
teh first chapter will be up later.
The title is.
To die for love....


KILEY

My mom yells at me "GET YOUR SORRY BUTT DOWN HERE AND EAT YOUR BREAKFAST"
I sigh.
"Coming mom..."
I yell back.

It's been a week since she passed away, and I still miss her deeply.
Still I cry myself to sleep.

I put my clothes on while thinking about those moments I had with her.
That moment when we first met.
And then the next rememerable thing that happened to me,
our first kiss.
And then...when she died...
My name.
Kiley,
Kiley Jones.

I believe it was 5th grade when we met. (i try to forget these kinds of things when someone dies)
It was the 1st of October,
My birthday.
We were still in the time where we could bring in those horrible tasting cupcakes for our birthdays and i did just that.

"KILEY! GET DOWN STAIRS! YOU'LL BE LATE FOR SCHOOL!"
I recall my mom saying.
Of course I was still late,
but no one care if you bring cupcakes and juice.

"George?" "Here." "Kiley?" "Late" "Melony?..."
My mind started to drift of to some far place way behond the rainbow.
During reading workshop,
I felt the stare of someone.
I just went back to reading my book.
I was reading a great book,
the Orangey Snickers series.
I was on the 8th book.
I couldn't concentrate on my book though.
The stare just staying, glued to me.

It was only lunch time,
when the stare finally stopped.
I got to read my book for like 10 seconds when the bell rang.
My class walked to the cafetirria.
I ate my lunch and went outside for recess.
I was hanging out with my friend Russel,
when a girl walked over to Russel.
"Hey."
She said in a beautiful voice.
"Hey"
Russel said back.
She started to walk away.
When she was out of earshot,
I whispered to Russel.

"Who's that?"
"Oh her,
that's Melony,
I think she's had a crush on me since like last year."
"No offence Russ,
but there's no way she has a crush on you"
"Why?"
I think to myself.
because she's too cute...
Little did I know my thoughts were being read right then.
After recess, I walked back to my classroom.

I see Melony walk in last.
"Figures..."
I say to Russel.



I hoped you liked it!!!






User Comments: [4]
Scarletgreen
Community Member





Sat Oct 18, 2008 @ 05:06am


"Figures..."
Hm, I wonder what that means.
Written: In poem format, story format is paragraph format. ;D
Good, though, it's interesting, and I like the story line, although I can't help but think you remembered what I said about a part of the writer's life is always in the story, and you put it in there on purpose. A writer puts it in without thinking about it.


xXStealth VisionXx
Community Member





Sat Oct 18, 2008 @ 02:25pm


Well It was kinda about you.


Scarletgreen
Community Member





Sun Oct 26, 2008 @ 11:53pm


I'm...sorry...I must have hurt you unimaginably. Please forgive me...


xXStealth VisionXx
Community Member





Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 12:19am


I do


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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