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Out of total bordem, I've decided to type out the history behind my comic.

Storyline: In Heaven, There once was a chest that held what was called regalia, High level ability's, and power over the elements of the world. They were only to be givien to those worthy, and to make sure of that, three guardians were made to do so. The Dragon, the Phoenix and the Serpent. The Dragon had no true care for human beings, watching there life struggles and seeing how some were, he cared nothing for them. The Phoenix saw the same, but also saw those who were brave enough to sacrifice them selves for others, and often respected such noble acts. The Serpent enjoyed seeing humans squirm, tricking others and betraying others seemed to entertain him. After growing bored, the Serpant decided to give a few abiltys to some who didn't deserve it, and chaos began to spread, those unworthy given the power began to riot and kill. This pleased the Serpent. The Phoenix saw this and decided to reward those who fought against the odds with power, and though it evened the odds, more people were dragged into the battles. The Dragon, not truly carring for such things only watched there childish actions. God now displeased with there actions banished them into the earth, The phoenix and the Serpant sent into the body's of humans in order to truly see what it is like, and even know what they feel. The dragon was Banished to live as a normal human being with no powers until he could feel for humans. The first of them to be examined is the Phoenix, who is sent into the body of a new born child, Named Brokudo. The next to be introduced is Drake, The serpents domain. A child who was often weak, and attacked, The serpent protected himand began to give him control of his powers. Though abit corrupted by The serpents power, he maintains most of his morals. And last, The dragon. With no powers, and angered by his situation, he roamed the world watching the humans, but still not getting anything about them. He then saves a women in trouble on a whim. Her name was Trina. The dragon some how effected by the sight of her face, and mainly her eyes began to feel abit for her. He stuck around her and watched over her. They slowly began to fall in love with one another. After having a child together, named Shuriu, they were suddenly attacked in a large scale riot, Trina dying while protecting there child. The Dragon began to feel it all, The emotions he had neglected to understand for so long began to coil up inside him and sending him into a violent rage. His power then returns to him and in one attack he ends the riot, leaving only his son alive. He decides to share the same fate as the other guardians, and resides in his sons body, keeping him safe and watching over him. The three have begun there journey, watching over the lives they have become apart of. What shall become of them?

Tell me if you like it! XD. This is only the history of the story, the actual stuff is about Brokudo, Drake and Shuriu, along with the characters they meet with in the story. I'm going to start doing bio's on them soon.






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-Safiria_Blood_Flower-
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 11, 2008 @ 02:05am
OMG! SO SAD AND GOOD~!


commentCommented on: Sat Oct 11, 2008 @ 11:06am
Well there you go, now that I know what makes Brokudo tick and what he really is I can gather a more clear perspective of his character. Its good! I never would be able to think up something like this.
Still, I have never seen nor been able to find your comic anywhere, so you must have it ridden somewhere lol



white-fang-demon
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vampirerockerchick
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 15, 2008 @ 12:17am
its briliant love. i acutally read it.. not just skimmed this time. ninja


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