hi everyone this is officially my first entry and i think im gonna start it off with a poem now i kno that this might suck but hey im new to this post me ur comments on how i can improve it any constructive critism is well appreciated well... here goes (just so u kno it's not supposesd to rhyme
HOW COULD YOU
knowing she's in love with him how can u be so heartless
u told her u dont care but u broke ur friendship
yea u did some nasty stuff but nothing this horrible
she really trusted u but u ruined that trust
the whole thing was messed up from the start but hey u didnt care
all u cared about was ur fun
u didnt think about how she felt
yea she did some things that she really regrets
but nothing she did desered this treachory
she cant believe u would do that
every where she turns there u r smirking at ur success
smiling at ur victory
if in the future u really want to hurt her
congrats u did that already
she wishes u would understand the heartache u caused her the pain the strife and everything
it is unbelievable that u would do such a thing
i mean how low can u go this is a deed worthy of the devil himself
he must be really proud
well i hope ur happy cuz u broke her heart and willfully too
this girl im talking about has probably passed u everyday
it might not be this situation but u hurt her sometime somewhere
or maybe it's a guy but everyone of us has hurt a friend
in a way non-imaginable just take the time to apologise
it mightnt heal the pain but it sure does soften the heartache
so always think
how could u
when ur gonna do something hurtful
could u deal with that nagging "how could u" for the rest of ur life?
thank u
blessthefate483 Community Member 
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