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I live somewhere in the united states. My best friend left me for a sissy and my parents are somewhere else. I don't know how i was born i just know i was. When i was born it was said that i wouldn't open my eyes until they closed the shades. When i
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dmamma
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Please please please read my story. It is on my journal...i need some constructive critisizem
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And it would have been more enjoyable with some more descriptiveness.