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I live somewhere in the united states. My best friend left me for a sissy and my parents are somewhere else. I don't know how i was born i just know i was. When i was born it was said that i wouldn't open my eyes until they closed the shades. When i
Hmmm, troubleing theory
In the darkness, i heard a voice calling out to me. The reminder from a friend not to go through the forest at night. The warning from the strange girl at school that something horrible was going to happen. My mother's last words, "Beware the darkness in the lightest corner." All those things came back to haunt me as I walked home that night. Those voices rang in my heard as I strained my ears. And then i heard it, the sound of a twig breaking behind me, the huffing of the other's breath. I ran, they followed. I screamed, they laughed. I tripped, they stopped. I lay there wishing it would end, almost begging for my death. My eyes were closed as i felt the hand on my face. The brush of lips against my own, more laughter and a gust of wind. I opened my eyes...nothing. I had just met the ghost if Malburry Park.






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High_On_Java
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 28, 2010 @ 06:47am
Good work. 2 and 1/2 ratings from me.
And it would have been more enjoyable with some more descriptiveness.


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