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poem. why
why am i me? who else could i be?
why are we here near or even dear?
who are my friends?
why are we all here?
hate leads to fear.
why hate in the first place?
do we really have a purpose?
are we trying to find something thats not even there?
are we really even here?
are we where we belong?
are we even truely us?
who are we?
are we searching for a paradise that doesnt exist?
not even in our world. do some people believe that you are you and i am me?
do some people believe that i am you and
that you are me?


please comment...i wrote it a while back but found it today and thought i might post it for people to read...






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coolio411
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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 06, 2005 @ 11:11am
I loved it and your so right.


commentCommented on: Tue Sep 06, 2005 @ 01:04pm
thank you. i love writing things like this.



hshaver13
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ifrit13
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commentCommented on: Sat Sep 10, 2005 @ 10:02pm
really makes ya think about things...like who your real friends are...an who are just aquaintences(or however thats spelled)


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 11, 2005 @ 07:00am
i had actually written it at a time in my life when i was having trouble finding out who i was. if i get to thinking about that again i pull out that poem and just start thinking about it.



hshaver13
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Van Moonflow
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 15, 2005 @ 09:50pm
nice


commentCommented on: Fri Sep 16, 2005 @ 12:01am
im glad you all like it.



hshaver13
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spartanslayer
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 28, 2005 @ 10:44pm
Don't normally like poetry but that was good


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 29, 2005 @ 02:53am
thank you. im in the processos of writing another one to post. either that or a new song.



hshaver13
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Private_Sheldon
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 06, 2005 @ 08:38pm
another good one ^^


commentCommented on: Mon Apr 10, 2006 @ 10:22pm
That was real deep! I'v go to say! I think your right, I also loved "killer" That was great, and really spoke the truth, at least the way I see it.



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