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Feeling Bad Sad Mad Never glad Feeling bad Is being down Is crying out loud Like a waterfall Rushing Or you just got dumped Feeling bad Is being sad And mad But never Glad crying

Posted by: AngelLyit Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 07:41pm

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Emo_Wuvs_Haylie
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Commented on: Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 02:29am


	i get the emotion and main poitn but poetry is more than making rhymes, try to get more rhythem in and extend more upon thought. "We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly." ~Shiro Jinaka~

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