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wat ever is on my mind that day, holliday ideas, and short stories
dreaming
ok i know that there have been alot of emo poems lately
so here is something difrent

its called dreaming

was i dreaming
it felt so real
yet so distent

you and i
did we just kiss
are you sure

so calm
so quick
did that happen

wow is the only word on my mind
should i return her kiss

my chest
its tight
i cant breath

my heart
its pounding
can you hear it

instinctivly i lean forward
my eyes closed
so close

in another moment
your mine

you tast so sweet on my lips
a moment that i wish could last forever
but over so quickly

was that a dream
you and i did
kissing

so real
so sweet
so distent






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Kani_Kaboodles
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 05, 2008 @ 05:09pm
I think I just came rainbows.
Not that that's anything different than hat I normally do, but still.
All throughout that poem, I had to surpress giggles.
Because that's all how it feels, at least when I'm expecting my girl's kiss.
But usually she kisses me when I least expect it.
Which is why, even down here in Okeechobee, I have my guard up.

Keep writing, dollface, it's adorable <3


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TACOCAT IS A PALINDROME.
commentCommented on: Fri Sep 26, 2008 @ 09:08pm
omigod- that was adorable! - just SO cute, heart



loveless red
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loveless red
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 04, 2008 @ 03:58pm
nevermind right now it makes me retch.


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