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Well I might just put my stories or poetry in it. Maybe stuff >< whatever I want. All for you to read!
Take the pain away



Your pain rings in my ears
I sit there shocked evoked by your strain
Wishing I could make the pain go away
To see you cry, I shudder
I can't make you feel any better
You reach out for me burning in tears
I cry for you knowing I can't do a thing
You start to fade away screaming
Your dying, I must be dreaming
I can't move
I can't heal
I can't save you
Your wounds are deep
The blood is everywhere
Your chest moving ever slower
I hear the whimmpers
I grab your hand for this one last time
All I could say was I love you
She said she didn't want to die
I could only hold her hand
I told her things would be ok
I held her close and gave her a kiss
I wish I could help her some how
Take all the pain away
She gave a small smile
I love you she said quietly
I felt her fade
The sunset over heard. The blood stained sky rained
If only I could have taken the pain away





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  • [05/27/08 08:41am]

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    silvery_rose
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    commentCommented on: Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 08:11am
    Wow that was... deep. I mean, that was good. I mean this is like poems I've seen written by people widely know. You did real well on this. Any personal emotions added in?


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