Hi, Journal
I recently wrote this poem after my fiance broke off our engagment; please feel free to let me know what you think and thank you for taking the time to read and for letting me know what you think.
Angel_Dancer87
Withered rose petals lay scattered on the carpeted floor
In unorganized disarray as they would have fallen that day
Dressed in white with eyes shining bright with tears of love and joy
I would have loved to walk toward you on our wedding day
My Dad would have proudly walked me down to you
Dressed in fine black boots with your hat put away
and tenderly squeezed my hand before he let go
Giving away his baby girl on that now lost June day
Wishing with all my heart that sometime soon
a blessing would come and take all of my pain away
But reality is taking hold, your love is bleeding inside
Phone call seemed an out; just don't think you could stay
But now I know that it wasn't meant to happen
At least we found out before we both said, "I do"
We fought with a passion neither could deny
Now I sit here alone, silently crying and missing you
Withered rose petals lay scattered on the carpeted floor
In unorganized disarray as they would have fallen that day
Dressed in white with eyes shining bright with tears of love and joy
I would have loved to walk toward you on our wedding day
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