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Can I not escape these dreams? They haunt me, With their evil schemes. As I lie here and fret. I wake, In a cold sweat. The moment feels so real. He takes my heart, He loves to steal. I have lost my place. And I think, There is no such thing as grace. I want that last kiss. Ill die for it, Because I can not feel bliss. I am in fear. As I am dying, You leave me here. These tears are so cold. You stare at me, Feeling so bold. Never did you love, Never will you care, I am leaving to be up above. I am gone now. You shed no tears. You banished me away, so take a bow. You did so much harm. But I do not care. I will always be under your charm.

Posted by: Confussledlover Sat Mar 22, 2008 @ 05:56pm

~*~ LoVe ~*~

It takes only one minute to get a crush on someone,
an hour to like someone and a day to love someone,
but it takes a life time to forget someone.

Im not supposed to love you.....
Im not supposed to care.....
Im not supposed to wonder where you are.... and what you do....
Im sorry i cant help it....i already fell in love with you

I still remember the day you where holding my hand....
you say ur gonna walk to the end of the world with me....
But Then... You leave me...
From the day you went away... i forgot how to breathe....
how to cry...
from that day.. im afraid of looking up to the sky...
from now on only im waiting....
things are getting blury.... i forgot what im waiting for...
LoVe?..... Is there really have True LoVe?
Where can i find the answer.... or maybe there is no answer...

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Commented on: Sat Mar 22, 2008 @ 05:57pm


	Does this poem seemed forced? I mean does it flow. I was trying very hard to rhyme. But did i lose my sense in the flow of the poem???

Commented on: Sat Mar 22, 2008 @ 10:57pm


	each time i read one of your poems i see more and more how good you are. it did flow and sounded like it was unintended. but as always what its about makes me kinda sad, im glad that you are getting your feelings out and its better through poetry than.....listening to elmo. but yes it flowed and it is beautiful poetry, go to this profile and read some of her stuff you will appreciate it... http://www.gaiaonline.com/profiles/?u=4776743 but she is REALLY good and i think you might like her stuff

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Commented on: Sat Mar 22, 2008 @ 11:41pm


	I dont think it sounds forced, i actually think its pretty amazing and ya. Im not really good at posting comments so ya, but i really do like it.

Commented on: Tue Mar 25, 2008 @ 12:52am


	each time i read one of your poems i see more and more how good you are. it did flow and sounded like it was unintended. but as always what its about makes me kinda sad, im glad that you are getting your feelings out and its better through poetry than.....listening to elmo. but yes it flowed and it is beautiful poetry, go to this profile and read some of her stuff you will appreciate it... MBOB AGREES cry cry cry crying crying crying smile

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Commented on: Sun Jul 06, 2008 @ 07:23am


	Hey, i figured i would post a comment on all your poems here so yeah anyways, time to be...A CRITIC!!! lol anyways... It seems to flow pretty well, it really does, you also had a rhyme scheme in there. But over all, its a pretty good piece of poetry, Good job biggrin biggrin

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