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Fairytales (New Poem:Please Read And Comment--Thank You ^-^)
Fairytales

How can I be your knight in shining armor,
when prince charming is right next to you?

He is everything and more than you ever wanted,
What am I to do?

He has luminous teeth,
while mine are full of grime.
He can give you the greatest of feast,
while I can only bring little from time to time.

His riches unheard of,
mines similar to the pleading of the beggars in the court.
All knights upon him given up,
I, left to fight varieties of all sorts.

His pride holds no guilt,
while my soul would be covered in filth.

His name heard on the earth below,
to the sky and Heaven above
going on into the unknown.

While I here remain the underdog,
before you I stand alone.

I honestly do not have much to offer,
all i can do is try.

Together we can do anything
even furthering farther from the neverending sky.

Reality can be so cruel,
as it holds me down to watch you go.
Finally too far for me to see,
Here again I stand alone.

Reality can be so cruel,
for the truth of the other's happy endings are concealed.
Please tell me when
Fairytales are actually real.


-By Jimmy...leave comments ^-^






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queen matt
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 10, 2008 @ 11:05pm
that was a relli kool poem very touching ^^
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KIRBY CAME TO SAY GREAT POEM I LUVED IT ^^


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 21, 2008 @ 05:35am
Nice poem! Keep up the good work!!



ChocolateGoddess19
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Anuyishi
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 27, 2008 @ 01:31am
Sexeh. <3333
I wrote a new peom too!
Check it out if you want to. ^^


commentCommented on: Thu Jan 31, 2008 @ 07:12pm
Very nice poem i like it V_v hehe keep up the great work jimmy



Deathwisheshell
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EmoBaby111
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commentCommented on: Fri Feb 22, 2008 @ 05:25pm
hey nice poem and i write too but dont have a journal soooooo...........
i have notebooks full at my house heart heart heart heart heart heart


commentCommented on: Fri Feb 22, 2008 @ 06:35pm
Thanks everyone ^-^



jimmythegreatone
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