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this is my story i will make about gaia also i may tell about my story that is started 2001 bits and pieces always i will remember my friends always ill remember peopel that donated to me:) Well thats the old description XD It contains fun stuff
1p: Prolfile of Kasmira
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Kashmira...
the only time u saw her was on my beloved 1 hour 15 tektek thingy now u clicked her name and came on her profile...

kasmira's caractor in the story:

Kasmira was rased on one of the kolonie planets of Esmirkunde (planet 5)
she was daughter of a slave so she grew up as a slave learning how to cook, fight and care for children and animals, till that one day...

Merel was walking around the slave market in search of somone to buy free, on this planet she cant show her face as a girl that's why she pretends she is a slave and guides richard and jeremy threw thelepathy...

Kashmira looks around, she see's two man and a girl comming towards the place where she is, ''they look ritch'' she thinks...

''richard i think that we should take that girl'' merel sends in a thelepathic mesage
Richard sends back: ''wel its ur call''
richard looks at her and Merel sign's yes...

''are they thinking about taking me'' kashmira thinks she almost says it out loud...

''How mutch is that girl?'' is what Jeremy ask's Kashmira's owner,
''3 bloks of pure titanium'' the man says
Jeremy turns around sending the mesage:''Merel isent that a bit to mutch?''
Merel sends: ''well we have enough and we will have to take somone i have a good feeling about her.''
Richard walks up to the man. ''yeah i think they asked the girl that's strange'' kashmira think's about it, ''a girl that can talk about it, must be my imagination''
''2 blocks and a sword then we will take her'' is what richard says to the man,
Kashmira shouts: ''Please take my littel brother to!''
''Quiet!'' the owner shouts at her,
Richard looks at Jeremy and Merel they both sign a yes,
''how mutch is the boy extra?''
''for 3 bloks and a sword u can get them both'' is his awnser.
''Cmon richard it's fair and i think it's the best choice we can make'' merel Thelepathicly sends at richard.
Kashmira hopes they do it, she whispers her brother: ''niro da koera teral*''
Richard takes the offer...

Later that day a few mile out of the town Merel, Richard, Jeremy, kasmira and her brother are walking among a path, Kasmira still do's not know with who she is...
Suddenly Kashmira makes Merel fall on the ground, Grabs her own sword and points it at Richard.

''Lesh tol cief of die ciet delf**'' is what Kashmira says
Merel responds: ''Lo dos ar vrei***''
Kashmira says: ''i know that trick PROMISE YOU LET ME FREE!''
Jeremy responds: ''would it prove u if the Esmiralda said it to you?''
''yeah but she isent here now will you let me free with my brother or not'' is what kashmira responds,
At that moment Merel shows Kashmira the neclace, Kashmira drops her sword she is shocked and says: ''ne le monda Esmiralda?"~
''Ké'' Merel awnsers, Kashmira drops on her knee's and says she dident knot she is really sorry, Merel says it dosent matter...
''well you are good in getting somone on the ground'' Richard says just before Merel throws him on the ground, ''that's ur own fault'' and Merel gigles when she says it...

Translations:
* niro da koera teral = Koera ill make shure we stick together
** Lesh tol cief of die ciet delf = let me go or he die's
*** Lo dos ar vrei = u are already free
~ ne le monda esmiralda = are u realy the esmiralda?
Ke = yes

This is as exact as i can wright it down i made this part about half a year ago,
mutch is happend sins she learned dutch that is the ectual language my story is writen in its half dutch half english cause there are british and ausralian peopel in it...

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Brisa-Bloom58
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 19, 2007 @ 07:33pm
Its really good. its hard to read but it is interesting and makes me want to read more


commentCommented on: Fri Oct 19, 2007 @ 08:16pm
wow. very interesting. keep them coming?



ForgetmenotSparkles
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blackbird26
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 19, 2007 @ 08:22pm
Yeah i was thinging about bolding it
and yes more will come about other charapters this is kinda how she came in the story


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 22, 2007 @ 04:52pm
imma making that avvie i looooooooooooooove it luv u birdie



Kashmira_Esmiral
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