hmmmmm....im starting a new story. I bet many of you did not know that i wrote stories. well now you do blaugh ill start you out with the most recent one that im writing. Just drop by to read it, and give me any suggestions if you think is should do something, okies?
Chapter 1
Armageddon. A single word that told the story about the utmost hellish time in world history.For people to merely read about it, what things did it open their eyes to.But for those few creatures who lived,breathed, and fought in the war of the kingdoms, the word peace had ceased to exist.By the end of the 50th century, every living thing had made its home on earth. After this, you had to fight your way up to earn your spot. show no mercy, and regret less....
Our story starts a little more than 20 years ago. A little girl named Aulia stumbled forward.
"Come on Aulia! Come to daddy! Come on!"
The little girl took a few more wobbly steps forward, and landed in her fathers hands, her chubby cheeks stretched to its limits with a smile.
"Good girl! You taught yourself how to walk on all fours!"
He held her by her sides,and scratched her behind her ears. Little Aulia looked up into her fathers eyes,then hugged his arm.
"I love you daddy" she said. His lips stretched into a gentle smile.
"I love you too sweetie" Aulia yawned
"Honey, are you tired?" Aulia shook her head weakly.
"No daddy,no sleepy time yet." Her father chuckled lightly.
"A growing girl needs her sleep." He started walking back to the house.
"But daddy, if i go to sleep,i wont get to play with you." Aulia's eyes were closed, and by now her father had taken her into the house, up the stairs, and into their bedroom.
"Aulia, i love you so much.I promise you i'll always be there for you" Aulia opened her eyes once more to find him tucking her in.He kissed her on the forehead, and then she drifted off to sleep.
That little girl Aulia, thats me.I was three, and that was the last time i saw my father Droxen. He was very young when i was born. About 21 years old. He was a handsome young warrior, and my mother was a pretty,and kind Lucar' cat crossbreed.My mother died when i was born, so my father took me with him. He was a very famous fighter at the time, and was known to have a gentle heart off the battlefield, but the fiercest skill on it. I took most of my mom's features, Long brown hair,full lips, long eyeslashes,her long legs, and of course her ears, teeth, and tail. But people told me they could see my father in my eyes.
" Those sparkling crimson gems" they'd always say.
That night my father was killed. I woke up to the sound of a huge crash. It was coming from downstairs.
"Daddy?" i called.
"who was that!?" snapped an unfamiliar voice.
"No! dont you dare hurt her!" i recognized this voice to be my fathers.
"Daddy, are you okay?" i got off the bed. I went to the door. I could hear some arguing going on.
"No, please, I BEG OF YOU! Dont take her! leave my little Aulia out of this!" I heard the whizzing of a blade through the air, and then silence.
"get the girl." somebody suddenly commanded.I heard heavy footsteps trudging up the stairs, and i ran to the bed. I was in tears by now, and i was terribly frightened. The door slowly creeked open.
"Little girl....come on out.....we wont hurt you..... we just want to give you something...."
Someone ripped the covers off of me, and i screamed at the top of my lungs. He grabbed my hair, and rocked my head back exposing my neck.
" you smell absolutely...delicious..."
His eyes were a sick yellow color, and he smelt of old blood. I thrashed helplessly, but it only made him grip tighter.He opened his mouth, and the moonlight glinted off his fangs.They were sharp, and pure white.I watched in horror as he raised his head,smiling evily the whole time.
"Now....this wont hurt a bit...." he purred.
He suddenly burnt into ash. His dead heart was pierced with a single arrow.
"COME ON AULIA! LETS GO!" someone grabbed me, and sprinted off into the forest.I later found out that it was my uncle Drix.He had made it just in time, and we escaped unoticed. Now at the age of 24, i have forever vowed to avenge my fathers death.
so? what do you think? is it good or what?
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