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A girl named Haruko had been abandoned by her family and tossed into the cold snow outside to die.
Haruko: W-why did you have t-to die mother?" Tears welled up in Haruko's eyes.She wondered for days until she collasped from exhaustion and hunger. spring arrived and the snow melted. a myterious young man was walking through the woods when he came across a girl lying on the ground in tattered clothes. he kneeled down beside to her check if she was still breathing.
Saigo: she's still breathing, i wonder how long she's been here. i better take her to the house.
Tayuko: "Ah, your're back master Saigo."
Saigo: "Yeah and i found a girl collasped in the woods."
Tayuko: "Is she all right?"
Saigo: "She's still breathing, which is good."
Tayuko: "You should get her out of those tattered clothes before she gets sick."
Saigo: "Yeah, i know." Saigo took the girl up to his room and changed her out of the tattered clothes into a blue robe. he waited paitently until she came to.
Haruko: "W-where am i?"
Saigo: "You've finally come to, it's already noon."
Haruko: "Who are you and where am i?"
Saigo: "I'm Saigo and you're in the Nae mansion." "May i ask your name?" Haruko: It's Haruko.
Saigo: "What a beautiful name, it means spring."
Haruko: "How did i get here?"
Saigo: "I found you collasped in the woods and brought you here." "What happened to you?"
Haruko: "My family abandoned me and tossed me into the snow, i wondered for days until i collasped from exhaustion and hunger."
Saigo: "That's terrible, what kind of family would do that!!"
Haruko: "If my mother was still alive it wouldn't have happened....."
Saigo: "Your mother?"
Haruko: "She was the head of the family and as her daughter i became the new head of the family but no else in my family cared for me, so they tossed me out." Saigo: "I still can't believe any family would do that, It's a miracle that you survived." Haruko's stomach growled. Haruko blushed.
Haruko: "S-sorry."
Saigo: "You must be hungry, come downstairs and i'll prepare something for you."
Haruko: "You cook?"
Saigo: "Yeah, you'll love it!" "I'll introduce you to Tayuko too, he's the butler."
Haruko: "Okay." Haruko started blushing as she raised her hand to her chest.(this boy has a kind heart).

To be continued.






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Dolvii
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 23, 2007 @ 07:43pm
wow it's verry good!
Haruko seems to act and be one of my characters i have in a story i have writen,
so i want to know who is this Saigo guy so keep writing! it's awsome! xd


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 23, 2007 @ 08:11pm
i like it!! ^_^ it's great keep on writin blaugh



Spookytap
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Osadin
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 08:53pm
try not repeat the beginning instead of saying it in the beginning she should she say it and its more of a surprise......but its awesome!!! other than that...


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