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I guess I should right something here.
So Anyway You all know today is July fourth, well since this is a holiday I'll post a story I haven't even have 6 paragraph's on it yet.... (IT's JUST THE BEGINNING FRIENDLY CRITICISM IS ALLOWED, NOTHING LIKE "GOD THIS ******** SUCKS" OKAY?!!!)
Rickudo
written by ME
(2010 A.D.)
There once was a beautiful and bountiful kingdom filled with peace and wealth. This Kingdom was led by Lord Ferid and Lady Ishtar (King-lord queen-lady) and their two children, Rickudo (MALE 18 years of age) and Saleena (FEMALE 15 years of age). They all lived peacefully until one fateful night, a man in a dark cloak with an enormous sword appeared in front of the castle doors looking for shelter.
"May I please spend the night here, my lord?" He asked with a devilish grin, "My supplies have run low and my fellow journeymen shall not be here for several days."
The king, being the benevolent ruler that he was let the stranger enter the castle. That is when things in the kingdom started going wrong.... After a five days the stranger had been accompanying the king to many events and places. The king had also been acting strangely. The kingdom was beginning to fall apart and the people have become poorer thanks to the new tax act. After a full week the kingdom was already in despair. People have been living in the streets even the landlords have no money. Queen Ishtar begged and begged for the king to stop but the king...he executed lady Ishtar that night...and it was that night the prince made a foolish mistake. He and the royal guard decided to attack the strange man who had been staying for more than two weeks. It was then that the man revealed his true identity, he was a wanted ex-assassin with eight-hundred million bounty on his head. Before the one-man war began he spoke, "I am going to become king, and will destroy anyone who stands in my way." He was a tall man with long red hair and eyes that glowed red and seemed to penetrate anything he looked at.
He picked up two long swords and in one strike the room that was once filled with knights and warriors, was now filled with corpses. The man however spared the prince. The man spoke once again, "If you wish to kill me you must first learn to hate, Hate beyond normal measure. My name is Helldom and I hope you put on a good show." It was that instant Rickudo ran to his younger sister's room took her and the ultimate weapon of the kingdom, Gaia's Sledge.