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...Enigmatic World...
Sepias View-1 ((Still Working))
Her eye's opened, crystal blue, contrasting against her pure-white hair. She watched the ceiling pointlessly as she let the wind blow kisses of cold upon her face. Moving her mystical eyes to the left she saw the outline of her twin sister sleeping as silently as a mouse.

"You always slept better then me" She whispered to no one in particular as she observed her sisters long pitch black hair to the floor.

They where identically opposite twins; one had black hair to the floor and the other white hair to the floor. One had forest green eyes and the other crystal blue eyes...so on when the identical opposite characteristics that there was no end, but one thing stayed the same...their love for each other.

Closing her eye's to try and sleep, she thought of what tomorrow might bring and why? She had a feeling that something was going to happen; something good and bad at the same time...something...but what?

Her eyes closed and her vision past into darkness, back into the world of dreams and nightmares...where only she and her furry friends lived.



Next Morning...


Sepia opened her eyes once again; she looked to the ceiling just like before. Then just like before she looked to left but her sister was gone. Looking troubled she raised her head a portion then squinting her eyes she looked to the clock.

8:45am

Making sure that she wasn't mistaken she fully got up, grabbed the clock and looked at it.

8:46am

"Oh my God!" she yelled out throwing anything and everything out of her way as she grabbed her school uniform and jumped for the bathroom.

"I'm going to be late,argh! Why didn't anyone wake me up!" she yelled out to no one in the house for she and her sister lived alone.

Pulling and fighting with her cloths and hair she ran into her room and looked at herself. Long dead straight white hair ran to the floor, a fairly built body could be seen underneath her black skirt and white top but the most obvious was her crystal blue eyes.

"Ok, I don't look that bad...right?" she asked herself as she grabbed her bag, stuffed anything she could grab in it for school and ran out the door, slamming it shut, and forgetting her lunch.

I'm going to kill her one-day, just wait and see she thought to herself again as she turned a corner and started running on the footpath, dodging and avoiding contact with anyone in her way. She looked at her watched and almost screamed.

8:55am

"This is so not good...not today! Today is Talent Quest Day,and I'm performing first!" she thought with almost tears to come out of rage. She just couldn't believe her sister would do that to her.

After all they where sisters,but then again Enigma was always the evil one she thought again as she leaped through the gates and towards the hall where the performing is to occur.

Entering the main hall room she looked around and saw many different colors and designs of cloths being made for the performance, each beautiful in their own ways. Moving towards the back stage she almost fainted at the sight of Mr.Colo. He wore a Scottish checked dress with a green woolen top and a flat brown hat or something similar.

"Go-go-good morning Mr.Colo...sir?" was all she could say at first as she tried to circle around him slowly to avoid making her day even worse as it was.

"Hang on a minute Sepia!" he commanded as he pointed one finder to the floor in front of him, gesturing her to moved there.

Moving slowly and carefully to the spot she looked up at him with a bit of fear and a fake smile, as he was about to open his mouth to say something, probably yell.

"Mr.Colo I'm sorry but-" she was but short as he intervened with his hand in front of her and a look of silence upon his face.

"Nothing to apologies about, your sister told me everything. I hope you cat gets well! I have postponed your performance till you arrive.You have a great sister to take care of you like that, you know?" He said it all with a warm smile and gentle eyes as he slowly walked to the stage to announce that she would be coming on shortly.

Cat...sister? She thought out of confusion, having no words in return for Mr.Colo about anything.

Placing her bag upon a chair in the corner she pulled out a long white dress and went for the dressing rooms. There she dressed,her crystal blue eyes like tears in the drought,so obvious against her white hair and cloths and pale skin, she knew that she looked beautiful. No one ever told her that she was but whenever she looked at her sister she thought Enigma was beautiful and because they where twins she must be beautiful as well...she hoped!

"Sister..." she whispered as she thought of the secret ways Enigma showed her love and how whenever she looked straight at her, in her eyes, she always felt like she was standing in front of a mirror that showed the exact opposite of who you are.



((Changed it a bit again...so hard to get everything right! sweatdrop ))






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Assasin_Yamura
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 11:35am
I love your descriptions! And your story line is quite unique! Keep writing. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 12:16pm
Thanks! 4laugh

Read everyday cause I think I'll be able to write something everyday. Also esp on Saturdays I will write a lot!
Later on you will get to see pictures of the characters, so you know how they look like and all!

If anyone would like to help, give ideas or try drawing one of my characters for me it would mean a lot! 3nodding heart



Orlia
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Wafflecist
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 12:32pm
I love it,i dont know how you dont like it.


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 12:36pm
It's not that i don't like it, its just that my introduction doesn't fully express my idea or the fun one will have in reading this...im bad with trying to tell the whole story in a few words and not give away the ending or so...help would be great! xd



Orlia
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Assasin_Yamura
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 12:47pm
Nice edits!


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 12:58pm
I agree with Assasin_Yura. It is a unique story. Keep going. I'll try and read it now and again for updates. surprised



silver_halcyon
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Orlia
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 01:07pm
Yeah sure I'll continue... I have people at school too who want to read it, so think i'll do it to the end! 3nodding

Tommorow and maybe a bit today I'll write a lot, at the moment my work is being edited by friends and will be updated with better techniques and descriptions!

Hope you all enjoy...God...I can't wait to draw them all and color to perfection for you all to see!!!!!!!! heart


commentCommented on: Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 03:33pm
Oh I read it backwards this whole time...Wow, I know some of the people above there. (posters above his post.) Al-in-all. I rate this story a 8.5 of 10. And I give you the Grey Kitsune award of "Dude! Your So good!"
(Came up with a name from my cousin, not as good as i thought.)



Grey_Kitsune
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