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ok i wrote a poem the other day and i want you guyses to tell me what you reely think. does it suck, rock, or is just ok? It is called half empty. half empty. a glass overturned spilling red blood on mom’s new carpet. almost gone. dripping faster the stain is deep and.....it....is.....spreading.....fast. empty. empty glass empty girl a carpet stained beyond repair. ok it is supposed to look cooler but it didnt quite work when i put it online

Posted by: GC tater_tot_104 Tue Jun 05, 2007 @ 05:20pm

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Commented on: Wed Jun 06, 2007 @ 03:46pm


	applauses I like it! ....But are me and Sam turning you into a blood sucking VAMPIRE?!?!?! rofl lol No, just kidding....or am I? domokun

Commented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 04:34am


	wow your poem sounds very emo. emo hey . . . your not the vampire i am. xp

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Commented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 11:25pm


	sounds emo...like something i wrote once..I called it, Let the Pain Flow...twas sad...dont be emo!!! emo

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