FIRST ENTRY!"Tortured"
She woke up on the floor with an excruciating pain. Her legs felt like they were broken. She had small cuts all over her body. She looked around the room. She was surrounded by four stone walls. No doors, no windows. She looked at herself. She was stripped of her clothes. All she had on were her bra, panties, and a belt. She was chained on to the floor. She had a scythe next to her. On the floor, all over the room, there were razorblades and broken glass everywhere. She noticed a monkey that had bled to death. She heard someone walk into the room. She froze. The person came up beside her, kneeled down, and said to her in a deep, whispery voice, "do not say a word. Do not turn around. Just listen to me." She nodded. "I'm sure you're wondering why you are here. It's quite simple, really. You used to cut yourself, hoping you would die. But, you always missed the vein because you were afraid to die. You were one of the people who took life forgranted. Now you have a choice of life or death. Look around you. You see nothing but stone walls, razorblades, glass, a dead monkey, and a scythe on the floor. You can also tell that your legs have been broken. There is only one way out of here. There is a door some where in this room. First, you must have a key to unlock it. I have the key hidden inside that dead monkey over there. You must find it. Take the scythe and cut the monkey open. You must dig around inside the body and find it. Once you have found it, you must look around the room and find the door. You have 24 hours. If you don't find the key in time, then you will die. Either from bleeding to death or lack of oxygen. Good luck."
(I could go further into the story, but I'll leave it like this for now.)"World So Cold" by Mudvayne (Saw movie clips)
Final Results Title: Tortured Score: 7.1879 Total Ratings: 306 Total Comments: 92 Rank: 0 Comments you received Katsnya Nice.
pluiie
william7z8tu2 Cool
Disgraceful Pearl Emooooooo...
QueenPhoenixFire Good luck!
Anon E Moose122 well... this is friendly
echo948499 Omg this is colorful :]
ahmahgawd xd
Dark Heartagram nice job ^.^ you did a really goods job hun
`adeline` Jealousy is a wasted emotion. Which is why I recycl
Always_Amnesia 10
ODINS choise its nice to see a lady in chains... smile
Razor Sharp Kisses Good luck~
[Arrow] D:! SET j00 FREEE!!!!
littile_amanda love it 10/10
Deerdra I like her!
KendraMiko HI! I'm voting for you. I like the outfit and the stroy! YOU GET A 10!
Kitazaga well it's interesting in the least
gaaraofthesandcountry BUMPQ ^^ DING FRIES ARE DONE 10/10
Princess_Allie wow
glea123 aw
Kenji Mori xD
ancestor907012 pretty cute
~[peNgeuIn]~ WOO!!!! best avitar i've ever seen! ;] 10/10!
chii323117 10
ndsguerms 9006 hmm.. this is friendly
soulesswanderer to me it is plain .....but the story makes it 10x better 10/10
King Dorkalicious THIS IS A 10/10!!! ^_^
chii323117 i love the avi i vote 10/10
BigK007 3
Zeke the Fallen one Looks awsome 10/10
The Darkness Of You Awesome avatar
Demonata Mistress im goin for that look to look like you got there first biggrin anywho its ace i give ya a 10 for it my dream is on my profile sadly i dont think the momo goes.
Starlessangels Very nice story. And this looks even better... Even though I'm not a fan of... Skimpy clothing like that. =/ A 10/10. =D =P
deathsam cute!!! 10
whitefire728 not bad
BabySparx Nice.
Celestial Firefly ...
gaffarty_04 Nice.
Tsukino-kun412 cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Inguz Kinky... Lmao
Shadow_Leonhart ...."
gir_ninja+3 eek omg save the ******** momo! 8/10
animechick36 ...
yuiotokido not bad
Lalaworld 10
Bumsnudel lol
round778510 I'm jealous razz
angel of bloody hell it original il give you that ^_^ you did good
kawar you look sexy so you get a 10
not_your_av_pixie Sorta like SAW, nice. this is the first I've seen of this idea. So in other words I think it's originale.
Fuzz E Panda strange at best
devilrider33 aw u poor soul
jeje441 i love it
operationqwe ok
Gaz_Girl_2dope =) You a fellow jugglette?
everythingwastaken 4/10
kawehi-oh-confused-lover ooooooooh i remember that part... that was awesome... X)
SilverMarine nice
rqqthmim Nicley done..
Synnovea ok
ResonantWings not bad
Cineya A bit too plain.
benzino187 cool
angryfisheatenbycat Someone's been watching too much saw.
Sango_chan243 nice story. kinda gory, but it makes some sense. it gets an 8
`adeline` Interesting story
Dark-itachi400 awsome
xexrcuxi great!!!!!
custom101057 Ahh!... quite good wee!
guitargirl365 ytjtyhethy
tinkerbellex lol nice
Bubble_Shrimp7852 okay???
boobalooba232 this is amazing
Baby Gizmo Thanks for voting guys! 4laugh You know, if you read the story, you'll understand more behind the outfit. Yes, I understand it's kinda plain, but, it goes with the story...
x Tea Leaves x quite interesting
ytel11 very nice like it^^
demonry2 good
galiz sadcomus cool
thermoplastick_________x ...
She`s 20/10 xd That is some crazy s**t.
mule a joaopaulo1511 bump
Phyfe nice
xXenter name hereXx be mine
4everinlight wow
cuban demon nice take off bra lol jk but nice
Dixxie13 I'm sure you're wondering why she here. It's quite simple, really. She used to cut yourself, hoping you would die. But, you always missed the vein because she was afraid to die. She is one of the people who took life forgranted. Now she has a choice of life or death. There is only one way out of here. She must find the key that is hiden in the monkey using the scythe, get the key and unlock herself. Then, she has to walk on razorblades and broken glass to find the door out. She has 5 hours. If she doesn't make it in time, she will either die of blood loss or lack of oxygen. Wish her luck.
emopunkqueen ..........
hotpinkhandbag Like the green hair, dislike the emo.
ArTeMiS_VeNuS ohhh =( you is cruel sorry but you avi is scary and tetric sorry 4
Cocacolabandit48 Ahh!... so joyful
Sarah_Malaria im loving the look on momos face ha ha
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