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Voice # 1-
Does it hurt to die
Worse then the pain inside
Would it be so bad
If I did just that
No one would notice
That I was gone
If they did
They’d all move on
No one cares enough
To feel for my loss
No one notices
When I’m gone
I don’t know
If anyone’s my friend
If anyone would notice
If I were dead
Because they don’t notice
The pain inside
The don’t notice
What slowly makes me die
Voice # 2-
Don’t think like this
Things will look up
Don’t dwell on the past
You’ve done that enough
When you hit bottom
You’ve got to go up
No easy ways out
Don’t take that one
You’re strong
You’ll get through
There are still people
Who love you
Tomorrow will be better
Just you see
Tomorrow will be brighter
For you and me
Voice 1
Voice 2
Between them chose
Sometimes one wins
Sometimes the other
One for ending
One for chance another
Dueling in my mind
On who wins that time
Voice 1
Voice2
Between them you have to choose
- Title: Voice 1, Voice 2
- Artist: Saebella
- Description: I wrote this a couple of years ago when I went through a pretty bad time. Iv got tons of these things lying around so I guess I just want to see if its any good. I tried to get the two voices poems opposite each other but it dint work.
- Date: 10/09/2008
- Tags: voice voice
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Comments (2 Comments)
- animelvr12 - 10/13/2008
- It is very well written. I liked it a lot.
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- ScotchandCyanide - 10/09/2008
- It's not bad at all! 'Rocked my sox with this poem! ^ ^ Your rhyming was consistent, and you expressed the meaning very well....
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