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Hidden 1
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It was black, all black. And I couldn't help but wonder where I was.
I took a step forward, heading more into the darkness. Then I realized, I was having another heart attack.
When I have a heart attack, everything closes in on me, and light disappears.
Soon after I feel a wave of lonely-ness, walking around in a dark world while in reality, im probably being rushed to the hospital.
I've been this way ever since I was 4. How do I know this, you ask? I'll tell you.
At the time my parents were at work, and I was left in the care of my aunt. That day, she took my to her rooftop garden on the second-floor. Not very smart, to take a curious 4-year-old to a second-floor garden, where I was bound to get hurt in some way. Of course, she started planting more flowers in her planters, and I wandered off to the edge of the rooftop.
At the edge, of course their was a concrete barrier/ledge. (Not really good at describing ... )
But strangely, instead of wandering off to the colorful flowers, I went to the edge.
At the time, it looked fun to climb. So I did, I put my tiny foot up on the top of the ledge, and I pulled my tiny self up. I stood up, and suddenly lost my balance. I swayed forward, and fell.
I had hit the hard concrete, but survived. Only after a few minutes of me hitting the ground had my aunt discovered I was missing. She looked everywhere, until she looked down from the ledge and saw me on the ground. I was rushed to the hospital immediatly, with several cuts and bruises, but also heart conditions to go with the fall. My aunt lost the trust of my mother, and I rarely saw her. So here I am today, still with these heart conditions.
(To be continued)
- by omfg harry styles |
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- | Submitted on 06/24/2010 |
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- Title: Hidden 1
- Artist: omfg harry styles
- Description: No plot really, Im just making up stuff as I go. (This is written in many persons, {1st person, 2nd person, third person} so it may get confusing )
- Date: 06/24/2010
- Tags: hidden
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Comments (2 Comments)
- 777-iPen-iSheep-777 - 07/10/2010
- "O THAT WAS SO GOOOODDDD!!
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- nadikinz - 07/10/2010
- its kinda confusing like you said in the beginning... lol if you need any other ideas PM me cuz this can be a great story i like it so far ^.^
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