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Love is like a seed
It grows when its being taken care of
It soon grows leaves and it finds the sun.
The sun is the plants happiness
When the sun leaves the moon comes
The shadow of the light is reveled.
The moon is cold to the plant
It blows the plant and shows darkness
But when the light comes back
The plant is overjoyed,
Seeing the sun so bright
Its warm light shines and holds the plant
And when the plant blooms the beautiful petals,
It shows the sun it has changed from a seed to a flower
But on the same day it had bloomed,
The moon shows itself again.
The moon had started the blowing
And then rain and thunder came
The rain soon had turned to hail
And the little flower had been struck with the furious moon
When sun came up
It had been terrified of what it has seen
The flowers petals had been scattered
The flower had cried and died of the hail
Just like how love will be destroyed when death comes upon them.
- by Death-Love-Angelx5 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/10/2009 |
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- Title: The Seed of Love
- Artist: Death-Love-Angelx5
- Description: please comment on my story if it has any problems with it please tell me
- Date: 08/10/2009
- Tags: seed love death
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ii Walk On Fire ii - 08/07/2010
- heh, thats cute :]
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- Sebastian the Ferret - 03/19/2010
- cool
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- Death-Love-Angelx5 - 08/29/2009
- thank you
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- Ebrathral_Mars Dragon God - 08/28/2009
- i find ur poem quite interesting to the extrem i give u 5 stars
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- Soundscrap - 08/11/2009
- dude lol
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- Death-Love-Angelx5 - 08/11/2009
- lolz Thanks i didn't know which one to put it in cause it was a story and a poem so i put it in this arena
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- xXRainbow_PixieXx - 08/10/2009
- That's deep.. You just need to put periods when you end a sentence and capitalize the beginning of one. Also, your story seemed more like a poem, so you should probably think about putting it in the poetry arena...
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