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She sits by the window alone in the darkness,
waiting for somthing to happen, for the phone to ring, for a knock on the door..
She is waiting for him,
she stares out into the rainy dark world...
suddenly she sees a dark tall person aproching her house...
she is frightened, not knowing waht to think
then she hears the buzzing sound of her door bell...
rushing down the stairs she runs to open the door...
when she opened it she started to cry....
it was him...
He held her close in his arms and he too started to cry
there they were standing out in the darkness, wet from the rain
they havent seen each other in 3 years
he leaned in and kissed her on the forehead
they came inside dripping water on the floor
she found his dry old clothes for him to wear
they sat near the fireplace staying warm
he told her the brave courageous stories of his troubles
he almost died
he sowed her the scar...
she burst out in tears and wraped her arms around him tightly
After a while they were gazing in each others eyes
he leaned close to her..
closed his eyes..
and they kissed pationatly..
THE END
- Title: rainy days turned around
- Artist: YOLO8697
- Description: a very emotional love story for the cold restless soul seeking warmth
- Date: 01/03/2010
- Tags: rainy days turned around
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Comments (1 Comments)
- prettybluedresses - 01/03/2010
- Some spelling errors which you ought to check up on. It seems rushed. Why not flesh it out so you can fully engrain the coldness of being alone and the sudden warmth of being with the one you love into your readers' minds?
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